This was a great first chapter. I hope the rest are just as good.

AWWWW!!! *girlish squeal* that is SO SWEET!! okay, okay, enough swooning.

That was marvoulous! I am enjoying your story so far!!! I may look to see if you have more stories when I finish this one!



Clarissa

oh, this is a really good spin off rather than the babies dying, and i like the affect of the snow falling,when they got back together and this part :"I don't plan on losing you just yet, Ms. Evans,” James said quietly as the two walked out of the hospital, hand in hand. “But I'm willing to start slow. How's dinner on Friday and a June wedding". It was very good , i liked it, and i liked brothers by choice, they are both very good! Keep writing!!!!!!!

Mmh, I'll be honest. I don't really like this much. I mean, first Lily takes an important decision alone, fleeing from James (I know he left, but only for a few days, and she never contacted him), gives birth to the girls without him knowing, and then she takes the decision of give them up alone, without even asking him first? She even chose the new parents alone! No, I really don't like Lily here. Sorry, but it's how I feel about this.

aww that was so sad and sweet at the same time. glad you wrote it and out it up. thanks

ok , i get that you had to stopped, but the rest of this chapter is really good. looks like you had a really hard choice bwteewn drafts, but the story over all was really really really really really really really good and so now i guess we have to say bye .................... that is until your next Lily and JAmes hit . So Keep writing and I'll keep reviewing !!!!!

I'm starting this while I'm reading it .. this may be pretty long .. just a warning... :S

Halloween Festival - “Just walk around and kiss all of the seventh year girls, if you want to find out.” - now if it had been Sirius with that problem he would've taken that advice

The Date Between Lily and James - Lily headed to their washroom, turning the sink on so that warm water filled the basin. James stood there, a whole six inches taller than her. - teeheehee.. I can just see it..

C37: Neighbors -

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“Too much like Hogwarts, huh? - teehee.. i wonder why.. lol
“I can't have people thinking I send my woman out to fight the noisy people in the world for me,” - HAHAHA.. oh frank...
“They don't work. See?” Alice said as she flicked her wand. Peter went flying backwards. - HAHAHHAHAHA it's always Peter .. no wonder he went evil.. HHAHAHA the slimy little rodent....

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“What do you want with me?” Lily asked. “I'm just a Mudblood.” .. only you lily.
“Did you know my father was a filthy muggle?” Lord Voldemort said. “I, the heir of Slytherin, am a half blood. Much like your dear Severus.” - not really something I can see him admitting.. but he's not always the sharpest crayon in the box.
“Oh, I just ran into Lord Voldemort at the mall,” Lily said casually. She pointed at the bag on the floor. “I got some really cute outfits.”.......“No, about Lord Voldemort,” Alice said. - HAHAHA lily oh lily..
“I'm pregnant,” Lily blurted out. “It's twins, and Voldemort and I had a chat in the parking lot at the mall.” James stared at her wordlessly. - HAHAHAHAHAHAHA

C41: Godric's Hollow - (i'm not sure her milk would come in.. as she didn't have the babies to work to get it to come in .. but she would get sore.. (though i'm defiantly no expert .. i could be wrong)

C42: - aawe

C43: - Mrs. Potter had taken control of the wedding plans, eager to have the two lovely children tie the knot before either one of them did anything stupid - hehehe
awwee.. poor James.. missin his Sirius
that would've been a great additional chapter

C43B: - Sirius and James hugged each other tightly as they did every time the two were apart and came back together. Lily could tell that they missed each other. - awwweee... would've been another great addition to the story even i just that part. the beginning of it kind of made Lily and James look like they had become the "old married couple" type.

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WOW that was possibly the longest review I've ever written.. :S sorry bout that.. always loved the deleted scenes from a good movie.. lovely to see them for a good story!!
Great job with the whole story!! sad to see it end, even though the future events are kind of set in stone (err.. ink)..
I'll keep looking for future stories from you .. and check out some of your older ones when i have the time.. (I have no clue how you find the time to write with 4 kids, I have 2 .. i can't even imagine writing a one-shot little alone a chaptered story - Hats off to you!!!)

Ramble on
dysfunctionalspirit

I loved the first one, the second was good too. The third and fourth, I think you did better with what you actually posted in the story, especially with the Voldemort thing. Much more tension in the actual chapters.

I really liked the wedding preparations at the end of the chap.

As I mentioned in my review of Chapter 25.. I think, I just finally came upon the story and started reading and couldn't stop.

I love it!

How often do you update?

Just started reading the story and couldn't stop since.

This chapter was not too too bad. Got worse as the chapter progressed though =]

you know, I had to go back and check to make sure that this story wasn't over just because lily finally accepted james's proposal. i'm so glad that everything is going well! (at least, everything as far as what has happened now. i mean, there IS still a party to attend - once james dries his hair, that is. lol!)

Oh! It was the cutest thing! lol I loved it so much! i am so glad that you updated! I would leave a longer review but my eyes burn and its making everything all blurry!
See ya!

ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She said yes..... finally. This chapter is once again so good IT was really funny on the baking part because that is so true! oh by the way: Hello!!!!! Again!!!!! And congratulations on your move!!!!! Anyways I really really like this chapter! Like always Keep writing!

YAY! AWWWW! That was so freakin cute! So glad to read something this great after testing all day! KEEP IT UP!