great story.. i love that harry liked her better all messy than all dolled up great job!!
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dysfunctionalspirit

Nice work on this piece. It was really cute and sweet! It's been a while since I've read a short and simple work like this. One irrelevant suggestion though. If this is indeed only a oneshot, you may consider changing the label to "Completed". That's all from me. Again, nice work!

Jo Bob

hey..great story..it was a bit funny but i don't know if it should be...uhmm..i just want to tell you that it's a great story and you don't have to say sorry to anyone...because it was great really and if they can't appreciate it much or understand it in a way that they will really love the story..then they are the "fools"

keep up the great work)

see yah!

mow09

I thought that it was pretty good. You are a really good writer and I can't wait for the next update of Ship of Dreams. Happy New Year.

Well, I likd it, but still I think when a girl is beautiful, caring about her appearance will make ehr completely stunning, which is the main reason for dressing up. so, while I like the fact that Harry likes her just like she is (and believe me I do, I even wrote a one shot where she gets extremely ugly for a curse and still he loves her all the same, which makes her go back to normal ), I think he would be completely drooling over a dressed up Hermione. Maybe a less klutzy version, though.

I'd have to agree with you there, the stories where she changes don't really stay to her character, if harry's thick well a little jump start is useful, but to completely pernamently change the wardrobe just to hook harry isn't really in character at all, good story!

I'm not a big L/J fan so I haven't read your work before. This is good as far as it goes, I hope it's not a one shot and that you have a happily ever after part to add.
Barmy

Really liked your story, as I've liked all of your stories. I do hope to see more of your work in the future.