i absolutly loved the chapter  it was really really nice!! you did a great job. hope you can get some more sleep  |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
Haha, yes, I hope I can get more sleep too. I'm feeling quite stupid at the moment because I keep doing odd things that I know I would not do if I actually had my full wits about me. I'm really glad it doesn't seem to have shown too much into my writing. |
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Nice chappie! Although there was a little to much character analysis it was okay. I like the thought of Draco's Dad in a red night cap, lol. Update soon! |
Author Feedback: Yes, I have a tendency to delve into my character's minds a lot, but I think that might just be my writing style. I think people either have to like it or hate it, and I can understand if you didn't exactly find it thrilling to read.
I thought it added a nice touch. It certainly makes me smile when I think of Lucius in a nightcap.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Draco's Heart of Ice is finally melting a little. i love it when it happens in fanfiction. the way you write it its slow and suspenseful not like other fanfiction where the tough guy falls in love with the girl too quickly and it gets all mushy and downhill from that point. and since the way you write romance between Draco and Ginny IS suspenseful it leave me itching for a sweet kiss on the lips. you know those in-the-moment-confusing-not-at-all-mushy-sweet-kisses that leaves both boy and girl on the verge of collapsing in shock! lol
anyway keep on writing! update soon! |
Author Feedback: I love it too. I can never make Draco totally evil in any of my fics because I have always seen him as the type who would give in to love eventually. I really did want to fully explore that in this fic though, so I guess that is why I am taking such pains to keep things at a more natural pace.
I know what you mean with the kisses, but truthfully I have no idea how any of their romance is going to pan out. I plan very little in terms of how people actually get together in my stories, or when their kisses will be. Your guess is as good as mine at this point, but I will know when the time is right for that final wall to be crossed.
Thanks for reviewing, and I'll try update asap! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 17/10/08
That was beautiful! Especially the way he defended her. Well Done! |
Author Feedback: Thank you!  |
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ohhh so cute! im in love with draco. he is so sweet. they just better hurry up and get togheter!
update soon! fantastic writing even if you havent slept in a while |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you like the way I am portraying Draco. I was just so tired of Sex God Draco, who's absolutely perfect with woman and can get them to do whatever he likes, that I really wanted to make Draco really quite useless with woman. I always kind of saw him in this way though. I mean, he doesn't seem like the type who really likes lots of affection and stuff, so it's been quite nice to actually have a story where he can be how I see him without people going "OMG OOC!!"
I know you really want them to get together, but I can't make any promises that it will be anything soon. I'm just letting this go naturally, and I don't want to push things at all.
Thanks for reviewing, and I will be sure to try update soon.
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Loved it!! Lucius finally met Ginny! I thought that day would never come. Im so happy he kind of approved of ginny! This was a really good chapter. I really did enjoy it!  Update soon!! Oh and is Julian ever going to come back? |
Author Feedback: Yes, he finally met Ginny.
I always wanted things to be a little tense between them, but at the same time I didn't want their relationship to be at that point where he just hated her point blank because she is a Weasley. I guess that's why I wanted him to kind of approve of her, as you said.
I'm glad you liked the chapter, and yes Julian will return to the story again, but not for a while yet. |
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nandaSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 16/10/08
this story is fanastic ! this chapter was great ! i love how you portrait draco and ginny . the last part with draco trying to restrain himsefel from ginny in bed was fantastic
i can´t wait for more ,
fernanda |
Author Feedback: Thank you. The next chapter is up, so I hope you enjoy it. |
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wow 3 months without Internet all that i have missed but I'm glad to read this beautiful story again. i so can't wait for the next chapter! i mean finally some feeling are starting to come over them. i want to see more of that. your a totally awesome writer. update soon! |
Author Feedback: Aw, well welcome back to the world of the internet, lol.
I've got quite a bit written of the next chapter, but I'm a bit pressed for time, so I'll have to see how I go with actually updating. It's just really hard for me to find spare time at the moment.
I can tell you though that the next chapter will see some closeness between Draco and Ginny. Probably not as much as you would like, but their relationship is definitly warming. |
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BellaJestUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 04/10/08
Hey,
i've been reading your stories(mostly ginny/draco ones)for the past few days, and I just wanted to let you know how much i've been enjoying your stories-you seem like a really brilliant writer, and I also appreciate that you don't write any explicit sex scenes-I don't like reading them, and enjoy your stories much more for it. I have also noticed that you don't seem to use any profanities, which also attracts me to the things you have written much more.
I hope you never loose the love for writing,
Bella x |
Author Feedback: Thank you! That really does mean a lot to me!
Some of my early stuff has a few dodgy things I look back now and think I probably could have done without, but that was at a point where I was not fully commited to certain things in my life and was just immature with my writing anyway.
I tend to use as little profanities as I can, and I am adamant in not writing explicit sex scenes. There is actually a story I am going to rewrite (Salvation), and one I am going to delete (Let Me Fall) purely because I dislike the fact that I have put in sex scenes, even though they are still very vague compared to others that I read. I just feel that it is unecessary, and I prefer my writing to be something that everyone can enjoy, rather than just the select few who like smut, or don't mind reading profanities.
I'm like you. I don't like to read explicit sex scenes or profanities, and it really bothers me when I find an absolutely amazing story, but there are these little things that just ruin the overall enjoyment. So I tend to keep my writing as clean as possible, and it's really nice to know that there are people who do appreciate my efforts.
You can be sure that I will not lose my passion for writing. Fanfiction has come to be quite the hobby for me, but I dabble in my own original fiction too, so I am very much a person who has a love for writing.
Thank you for reading, and also for sharing this review with me. It was just what I needed to hear!  |
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TinaUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 03/10/08
awww poor draco!!! i hope he isn\'t so frustrated in the next chapter cause it\'s just too sad those two don\'t get together! well together as you know |
Author Feedback: He'll cool down a bit, but things are hard for both of them. This is like their time of 'discovery', so I'm just letting them get a feeling for each other and their developing feelings without rushing into the physical stuff. |
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Great story, I really like that they just don't automaticly start loving eachother just because they are married  I am looking forward to reading your next chapter |
Author Feedback: Hhaa, what a relief. I know that people are expecting the two to be falling all over each other, as that is the way these fics often go, but I personally feel that they are no where near ready to be jumping into each other's arms. I've spent a lot time planning this fic, and I don't want to ruin that by rushing into the heavy romance.
I've got quite a bit written of the next chapter, but I'm really busy with university, so I am unsure when I will next update. |
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Great chapter and don't worry about those people that pester you to update. Update when you can. If you're rushed the chapters don't come out to your best possible standard and you get tired of the story. Enjoy yourself. This is after all why you do it right? |
Author Feedback: You're right, and thank you. It does ruin things if I try rush, so that's why I'm grateful people are resisting the urge to demand me to update now. |
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Author Feedback: Lol, yes, poor Draco is feeling very awkward by everything. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try update asap. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 29/09/08
I do like it and it didn't seem rushed. Good chapter. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. That makes me feel a lot better. |
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Your Anonymous reviewer in spanish says Hi and that he/she is very glad that their relationship is starting to progress and that your story has a nice rhythm to it. OH(this is abercrombie) I forgot to tell you in my other review that I love it when you make Draco uncomfortable!! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for that!
I love it when I make Draco uncomfortable too  It's too much fun.
I'm glad you liked the chapter. It's been a relief to know that not everyone found it awful. |
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