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wow 3 months without Internet all that i have missed but I'm glad to read this beautiful story again. i so can't wait for the next chapter! i mean finally some feeling are starting to come over them. i want to see more of that. your a totally awesome writer. update soon! |
Author Feedback: Aw, well welcome back to the world of the internet, lol.
I've got quite a bit written of the next chapter, but I'm a bit pressed for time, so I'll have to see how I go with actually updating. It's just really hard for me to find spare time at the moment.
I can tell you though that the next chapter will see some closeness between Draco and Ginny. Probably not as much as you would like, but their relationship is definitly warming. |
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BellaJestUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 04/10/08
Hey,
i've been reading your stories(mostly ginny/draco ones)for the past few days, and I just wanted to let you know how much i've been enjoying your stories-you seem like a really brilliant writer, and I also appreciate that you don't write any explicit sex scenes-I don't like reading them, and enjoy your stories much more for it. I have also noticed that you don't seem to use any profanities, which also attracts me to the things you have written much more.
I hope you never loose the love for writing,
Bella x |
Author Feedback: Thank you! That really does mean a lot to me!
Some of my early stuff has a few dodgy things I look back now and think I probably could have done without, but that was at a point where I was not fully commited to certain things in my life and was just immature with my writing anyway.
I tend to use as little profanities as I can, and I am adamant in not writing explicit sex scenes. There is actually a story I am going to rewrite (Salvation), and one I am going to delete (Let Me Fall) purely because I dislike the fact that I have put in sex scenes, even though they are still very vague compared to others that I read. I just feel that it is unecessary, and I prefer my writing to be something that everyone can enjoy, rather than just the select few who like smut, or don't mind reading profanities.
I'm like you. I don't like to read explicit sex scenes or profanities, and it really bothers me when I find an absolutely amazing story, but there are these little things that just ruin the overall enjoyment. So I tend to keep my writing as clean as possible, and it's really nice to know that there are people who do appreciate my efforts.
You can be sure that I will not lose my passion for writing. Fanfiction has come to be quite the hobby for me, but I dabble in my own original fiction too, so I am very much a person who has a love for writing.
Thank you for reading, and also for sharing this review with me. It was just what I needed to hear!  |
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TinaUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 03/10/08
awww poor draco!!! i hope he isn\'t so frustrated in the next chapter cause it\'s just too sad those two don\'t get together! well together as you know |
Author Feedback: He'll cool down a bit, but things are hard for both of them. This is like their time of 'discovery', so I'm just letting them get a feeling for each other and their developing feelings without rushing into the physical stuff. |
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Great story, I really like that they just don't automaticly start loving eachother just because they are married I am looking forward to reading your next chapter |
Author Feedback: Hhaa, what a relief. I know that people are expecting the two to be falling all over each other, as that is the way these fics often go, but I personally feel that they are no where near ready to be jumping into each other's arms. I've spent a lot time planning this fic, and I don't want to ruin that by rushing into the heavy romance.
I've got quite a bit written of the next chapter, but I'm really busy with university, so I am unsure when I will next update. |
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Great chapter and don't worry about those people that pester you to update. Update when you can. If you're rushed the chapters don't come out to your best possible standard and you get tired of the story. Enjoy yourself. This is after all why you do it right? |
Author Feedback: You're right, and thank you. It does ruin things if I try rush, so that's why I'm grateful people are resisting the urge to demand me to update now. |
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Author Feedback: Lol, yes, poor Draco is feeling very awkward by everything. I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I'll try update asap. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 29/09/08
I do like it and it didn't seem rushed. Good chapter. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. That makes me feel a lot better. |
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Your Anonymous reviewer in spanish says Hi and that he/she is very glad that their relationship is starting to progress and that your story has a nice rhythm to it. OH(this is abercrombie) I forgot to tell you in my other review that I love it when you make Draco uncomfortable!!  |
Author Feedback: Thanks for that!
I love it when I make Draco uncomfortable too It's too much fun.
I'm glad you liked the chapter. It's been a relief to know that not everyone found it awful. |
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This was a nice chapter. I enjoyed it!! Please update soon!!  |
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I want to cry. If Ginny would just relize-ughhhhhhhhhhhh. Great chapter, keep it up. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE let there be a kiss or something in the next chapter...PLEASE?????? *begging* |
Author Feedback: Lol, I'm sorry but there will not be a kiss in the next chapter. It is coming though... just not saying when. I'm not planning on making this fic too big at the moment, so you can expect to see a lot more happening from this point on in terms of the romance.
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Oh, but I did like it! Actually it was really funny. I just love Draco in this situation, especially when he 'discovers' Ginny in a new light. He just gets so tetchy, its so much fun to read! I'm glad he actually told her about the little scheme and she didn't find out about it herself. Then, he'd really see hysterics...(which would probably be even more comical...just putting that out there) Things are going to get a lot more interesting when they go home, won't it? Whatever will Narcissa do to um...'speed up' the process? Ha! Can't wait!  |
Author Feedback: I'm so happy!
I was really worried people would not like this chapter, but I seem to have gotten good feedback from it so far.
Draco is a cutie. I can't help but mess with him, because it's just so fun to make him get all uncomfortable. He's so awkward around women, and even more so with Ginny.
I did consider having her find out when she met Lucius, but I decided against that after all that, because I'd rather have the meeting with Lucius go a little differently to how I originally planned. But you're right, there most definitely would have been hysterics.
Things are going to get A LOT more interesting once they go home. I think that might be why I keep getting writer's block. I'm too eager to get to the good bits, and I never feel like writing the 'filler' chapters.
In any case, thanks for reviewing, and hopefully I'll find some time to write the next chapter soon. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 28/09/08
HOLA
Fue encantador, se ve el progreso que lleva la relacion y a mi parecer lleva muy buen ritmo de redaccion, gracias por los capitulos |
Author Feedback: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it, and that you think the rhythm is good. |
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"Draco had to fight against the sudden urge to close his eyes and wondered how it was that she could have such an affect over him." "affect" is a verb (unless you're talking about belongings, i.e. "your personal affects"), effect is a noun, as in "to have that effect on him".
WOW This was such a fun chapter. Nice ending |
Author Feedback: You know what's funny. I actually looked at that when I was going over it and went, "that looks wrong", but then I am always double guessing myself and usually get it wrong, so I just left it. Just goes to show I should trust my instincts next time.
Glad you liked the chapter anyway, and thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 28/09/08
i do like the chapter. thanks for putting the effort into updating. your one of the few suthors you updates regularly. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I'm glad you think I update regularly. It makes a nice change from the complaining about my updating. |
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Don't beat yourself up. We all have writers block form time to time and this chapter was amazing! I can't wait to see the next chapter. You've really taken my attention. Good luck with the next chapter and your writers block. |
Author Feedback: lol, thanks. I'm glad you liked it. It's given me a bit more confidence, so hopefully the next chapter will come easier for me.
Thanks for reviewing, and I'll try update asap. |
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