A nice bit of fluff. For somewhere not set anywhere in particular, you certainly have a lot of unnecessary elements running around, for example Luna and to a lesser extent, Sirius. I like Luna, don't get me wrong, I just don't understand why she is in what appears to be a one shot.

Great Story as always ... This was a wonderful Christmas Present to those of us who have adored your writing for years.

Hope the New Year brings us much more storytelling from my favorite MadScientist! *grin*

I myself am planning to start writing in earnest again real soon ... as soon as I find a place to live.

You are one of the best Mike.

Take Care and Happy New Year

As Always,
Muirnin - who loves trying to read your writing at work ... with out getting into trouble!

I clicked on this because it's a completed one shot - just what I'm looking for at this moment. And then I find the Heinlein quote. I'm in.
And now I'm reading...
Just hit the Amortentia bit...not my cup of tea that whole Bad-Ginny-Tricked-Harry thing, but am going to continue because the rest of the storyline holds such promise...
I love your idea of Harry's magic - it's "size" so to speak.
OK, now I'm laughing!! I thought the Christmas crackers were the bon-bon type - that you pulled with another person and got a hat and a joke and treat - but I've just discovered they're something you eat!! I'm a bit of a goose!
Despite the matchsticks holding my eyes open (I REALLY need to go to bed!) I managed to get to the end! I really enjoyed your narrative style and the dryness of much of Harry and Hermione's verbal interaction, very humorous - which all sounds like a mouthful but just means it was a great read!
Well done and thank you! (And if I wasn't so tired I'd no doubt commnt on many other excellent "bits" - sorry...but I need to !)
Cheers,
JanieB

This was a very, very sweet and hot story and I never get tired of reading your stuff! I hope you send something in again very soon! Brilliant work as always!!

That was pretty hot! I enjoyed all the lovely Harmony and the fact that Sirius, Remus, and Tonks were all still aroung. Thanks for referring to Ginny as "the slag" Loved it!!

i really liked to read that story, but i must admit i was a little confused at the beginning...Well maybe not the beginning, more the explanation what happened before... But all in all i give two tumbs up!

That was wonderful. It was very detailed. I absolutely love your writing style. Very different from other writers. Also!!!! I loved the idea of Hermione's sexual fantasy. Very naughty and fun!

Really nice. I loved how she was seducing him in the library, it was hilarious to see how he would react to her every word and move...

WOW!!! Very...Very well done. I really like how you wrote Hermione! It was smokey, sultry, smoldering with warmth and an unspoken sensuality. This story is worth much more than a one-shot! However, you really need to consider a Beta reader or, at least, proof read a bit more carefully. I am very impressed and would love to see you write more using the same characters.

Absolutely loved it and would love to read the back story as well.

How the heck did Sirius come back? How was Ginny's duplicity revealed? This is different than the Circle's End so my imagination is going wild.

I think what I liked most of all was the lack of surprise, the inevitability of Harry and Hermione coming together. It's a nice breath of sanity at the close of an otherwise crazy year.

Hope you have a fantastic new year full of harmonious inspiration.

Very well written. Great job; far too many details, but it worked! And it's so believable too! What Ginny did...EXCELLENT WORK! Keep writing!

ahh loved it. It was really good and funny and they made love. The love scene was great,

Merry Christmas indeed. That was very well written, I loved the story, though I kinda wonder what Harry was feeling for her all those years- was he just totally taken over by the potion?

by the way, i love how you brought sirius back and went along with the love potion idea with ginny. and i adore your portrayal of ron/luna.

you know, i usually don't read NC17 fics, but this is was just fantastic. one of the better sex scenes i think i've ever come across. very well written. great work.