atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/08/09
That was EMOTIONAL. The language, the plot, and the characters just fitted so well together. Nicely done. |
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UpAllNightUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/04/09
Just wanted to let you know I still come and read this story whenever I'm bored. I would even venture to say it's my favorite. Thank you so very much for this. |
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chelley83Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/02/09
i really liked this story...it's how you would think those two would really be if they had ever gotten together...and i always thought they were more suited than ron and hermione...those two are just a disaster waiting to happen...anyways thanks for writing this and i can't wait to read your other stuff |
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Great one-shot, resally well written. Love that you saved Sirius! Nice Weasley-bashing too. And you've got to love Luna and her refreshing outspokenness... |
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Wow..i can see now why this story was recommended. harry and hermione's first time was sooo sweet!!especially harry...he was adorable!! too bad it didn't show them getting dirty in the library...dat would hav been hot!! great job!! |
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Merry Chritmas...two months late
Anyway great fic! I really enjoyed reading it! |
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Two words: absolutely amazing. Your work, especially Circle's End, has been some of my favorites on portkey. You capture Harry and Hermione so well. This is why H/Hr works! I can't wait for more stories |
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LestatUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 09/01/08
*bows*
not worthy!
*bows*
not worthy!
good lord thats some damn good writing. just got back from winter break and am catching up. Should be headed for looking glass if theres an update there shortly.
definitely the best writer on portkey. no question about it. |
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Sch1av0naSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/01/08
Lovely story, I always love how you manage to capture Harry and Hermione as I so wished them to be and not the "could have been's" that they ended up as in Canon.
I really enjoy your Christmas stories and I'm following "Looking Glass" just as eagerly.
Thanks for the Christmas present. |
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silverleafUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/01/08
Nice once shot, very nice. Only problem I had, is basically the same problem I have with almost every portkey writer, in that they tendency is to make Harry into a huge pile of angst. Conversly, Hermione, is so strong that 100 of her on kin could die in front of her, and she would shrug it off...
A little extreme perhaps, but the facts remain the same.
At any rate I do like it, it was excellent. Although, maybe just maybe one day you could write a fic, where Harry is the strong one? |
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Realized that I had never reviewed this one.
I love that quote.
Always fun to Weasley bash, especially when Luna's involved. |
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Delightful story. The sex was delicious (tho there could have been more - especially about her library fantasy).
Thanks! |
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This was a beautiful story. I love the way you brought them together as well as brought Sirius back from the Veil. I also very much enjoyed the way you wrote the idiot Ron and his skank sister. I never thought those two were right for Harry and Hermione and I like to see other people notice it too. And to have them dosing Harry for schemes to make them main in his life, then banished. I loved it. |
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That was a fantastically written one-shot! WOW!  This is defenitely one for the favorites list. Loved the story, the writting and the characters. Great work! |
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SireiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/07
Wow, just wow *fans herself* that was hot and one of the best adaptions to HBP and DH that I have read before. I must say that I am just salivating to read more *mew* now I need a cold showewr  |
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