Great one-shot, resally well written. Love that you saved Sirius! Nice Weasley-bashing too. And you've got to love Luna and her refreshing outspokenness...

Wow..i can see now why this story was recommended. harry and hermione's first time was sooo sweet!!especially harry...he was adorable!! too bad it didn't show them getting dirty in the library...dat would hav been hot!! great job!!

Merry Chritmas...two months late

Anyway great fic! I really enjoyed reading it!

Two words: absolutely amazing. Your work, especially Circle's End, has been some of my favorites on portkey. You capture Harry and Hermione so well. This is why H/Hr works! I can't wait for more stories

*bows*

not worthy!

*bows*

not worthy!

good lord thats some damn good writing. just got back from winter break and am catching up. Should be headed for looking glass if theres an update there shortly.

definitely the best writer on portkey. no question about it.

Lovely story, I always love how you manage to capture Harry and Hermione as I so wished them to be and not the "could have been's" that they ended up as in Canon.

I really enjoy your Christmas stories and I'm following "Looking Glass" just as eagerly.

Thanks for the Christmas present.

Nice once shot, very nice. Only problem I had, is basically the same problem I have with almost every portkey writer, in that they tendency is to make Harry into a huge pile of angst. Conversly, Hermione, is so strong that 100 of her on kin could die in front of her, and she would shrug it off...

A little extreme perhaps, but the facts remain the same.

At any rate I do like it, it was excellent. Although, maybe just maybe one day you could write a fic, where Harry is the strong one?

Realized that I had never reviewed this one.

I love that quote.

Always fun to Weasley bash, especially when Luna's involved.

Delightful story. The sex was delicious (tho there could have been more - especially about her library fantasy).

Thanks!

This was a beautiful story. I love the way you brought them together as well as brought Sirius back from the Veil. I also very much enjoyed the way you wrote the idiot Ron and his skank sister. I never thought those two were right for Harry and Hermione and I like to see other people notice it too. And to have them dosing Harry for schemes to make them main in his life, then banished. I loved it.

That was a fantastically written one-shot! WOW! This is defenitely one for the favorites list. Loved the story, the writting and the characters. Great work!

Wow, just wow *fans herself* that was hot and one of the best adaptions to HBP and DH that I have read before. I must say that I am just salivating to read more *mew* now I need a cold showewr

A nice bit of fluff. For somewhere not set anywhere in particular, you certainly have a lot of unnecessary elements running around, for example Luna and to a lesser extent, Sirius. I like Luna, don't get me wrong, I just don't understand why she is in what appears to be a one shot.

Great Story as always ... This was a wonderful Christmas Present to those of us who have adored your writing for years.

Hope the New Year brings us much more storytelling from my favorite MadScientist! *grin*

I myself am planning to start writing in earnest again real soon ... as soon as I find a place to live.

You are one of the best Mike.

Take Care and Happy New Year

As Always,
Muirnin - who loves trying to read your writing at work ... with out getting into trouble!

I clicked on this because it's a completed one shot - just what I'm looking for at this moment. And then I find the Heinlein quote. I'm in.
And now I'm reading...
Just hit the Amortentia bit...not my cup of tea that whole Bad-Ginny-Tricked-Harry thing, but am going to continue because the rest of the storyline holds such promise...
I love your idea of Harry's magic - it's "size" so to speak.
OK, now I'm laughing!! I thought the Christmas crackers were the bon-bon type - that you pulled with another person and got a hat and a joke and treat - but I've just discovered they're something you eat!! I'm a bit of a goose!
Despite the matchsticks holding my eyes open (I REALLY need to go to bed!) I managed to get to the end! I really enjoyed your narrative style and the dryness of much of Harry and Hermione's verbal interaction, very humorous - which all sounds like a mouthful but just means it was a great read!
Well done and thank you! (And if I wasn't so tired I'd no doubt commnt on many other excellent "bits" - sorry...but I need to !)
Cheers,
JanieB