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newyn
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 09/09/08
This is wicked fun, and I am only into the second chapter. It's not often we see Harry enjoying a parade of nubile witches visiting him in his bedroom.

Whimsical fun aside, I am struck by plenty of clever thinking that went into the backdrop to this story. The solution to locating Harry despite his unplottable address and the muggle-repellent post-its are but two of the ideas here that are elegant in their simplicity.

Also, I find Mad Eye's reaction after seeing evidence of child abuse in No. 4 Privet Drive to be very satisfying. Its one aspect of your stories that has me convinced you really mean what your penname says.

The Dursleys never got their proper comeuppance in canon, and I always wondered whether JKR was not bothered enough by this horrible crime to set it right in the books. Thank Merlin we have you and fanfic to fix what canon messed up.

Keep fixing!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 11/08/08
This story is an awesome tale. Thank you for sharing it.
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 07/08/08
Mad Eye is one hell of a peeping tom.

HA HA! I love how Dumbledore got smacked down! Serves the bastard right! An excellent story! 10 out of 10!
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 07/08/08
YES! Finally! Harry and Hermione end the sexual tension! Go Harry! Give to to her and use everything you've got!
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 07/08/08
Ha! Shack learned his place! Got beat by a nude witch and two eunches! The Susan scene was way too cool for mere words. Never thought she'd be into BDSM though....
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 07/08/08
Teeth? Teeth down THERE?

Ouch, just ouch. That is so wrong is so many ways.

Original but it hurts just thinking out it. I would never mess with one of them!
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 07/08/08
That was certainly a new take on Katie. I can believe her falling for Harry after spending the night with him.

Fluer though! Man of man, I could almost hate you if you weren't so good at writing this story! Fluer had to leave! ;.;

Ginny though, ha! Little tramp doesn't deserve a turn!
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 07/08/08
Hmmmmm...a peep hole that both sides used. I wonder if anythign else happened?
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/08/08
You captured Luna's personality perfectly! I can see her doing that easily!
 

Keytobias5
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 07/08/08
This is a great story! I especially love the new take on Hermione and her helping Harry! I can't wait to read the rest!
 

Angrigon
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/07/08
Plain and simple. I was laughing through out nearly the whole thing!!!!!!!
 

Zeelthor
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 02/06/08
Well, I do love Dumbledore and any bashing of him is from my point of view, blasphemy at it's peak..
But, because it's you, I'll make an exception.
The story was good, although terribly strange.
Is there a -cough- more adult version to find?

Ingenius of you to bring characters from Sweat of the gladiator into this fic, btw.. Or the other way around, I dunno.
Author Feedback: I've posted a slightly racier version on patronuscharm.net that includes explicit Harry/Multi activities that, while falling short of shagging, still violate the rules of this site.

It's also a better version of the story, in my opinion.
 

ailishmckechnie
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 29/05/08
Is there going to be more to this story? or is this were it ends, it\'s been great so far
Author Feedback: This is finished, at least for now. And if I do pick it up, it would likely be a Harry/multi version that couldn't be posted on this site.
 

Cedriclover22
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 19/05/08
it is really good and really funny. and harry and hermione belong together.
 

Ricci
Unsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 30/04/08
I like this story. IT was well written and orginal. My only problem is that when Harry and Hermione finally hook up, he's still 15 and she's 16.
Author Feedback: Thanks for the review.

The age of consent in England and Wales is 16, so yeah, legally Harry jumped the wand by a few weeks. Not that I'd expect to see a legal case made against a 16 year old girl having consensual relations with a 15 year old boyfriend.

As for the ethical/moral issues...teenaged sex is a reality in Europe/North America, even without Dark Lords running around trying to kill the kids. Harry and Hermione have always been old for their age, and the "Carpe Diem/I don't want to die a virgin" angle is something they'd realistically have to deal with given the threatening situation that JKR created for them.


 

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