LeaneyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/12/07
wow that was so sad!
It made me tear up a bit. Very good story. The amount of description and your vocab was very well intwined within the story and impressive to say the least.
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not much really. The flow was decent. everything seemed just fine and was a story worth reading 
--Leaney |
Author Feedback: I know...I specifically wrote the story to get the emotion from my readers...hell, even I teared up when I was writing it...
Thanks for reading and reviewing...I'm glad you liked the story |
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I officially have tears in my eyes. Congratulations, you moved me. This story was heart wrenching. All goes to show how good of a writer you are.
Merry Christmas |
Author Feedback: Heart wrenching, yes...it was meant to be.
I'm moved that you think I'm a good writer, because I definitely couldn't even hold a light to some authors here on PK...
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and Merry Christmas to you too. |
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Oh. My. God. Tissues indeed... And three cheers for a Christmas story that ends wel 
Anyway, good work o this... Even if it's sadder than Malfoy surviving the war |
Author Feedback: Yeah, some people do need tissues with this story...I almost did, while writing it...and I'm glad you liked it...thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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It was very sad but you convey many other feelings at the same time. I don't usually cry with fanfiction, but I almost lost it at the end... Almost!
Congratulations for this shot.
sakura_txell |
Author Feedback: Almost? 
I try to mainly convey the fact that life will be okay, despite the circumstances...that James can be as resilient as his parents.
Thank you for the congratulations...it means a lot.  |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/07
Well, way to make it slightly sad for a Christmas story. Sadness. Wonder what happened to Harry. Lovely job though.. |
Author Feedback: The story was meant to be sad...Harry actually got killed by a curse, and Hermione was impacted by it, in a way that it kills her slowly, its culmination reaching on the Christmas of the year in the story...but I'm glad you liked the story nevertheless. |
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Author Feedback: This story was meant to be sad...I didn't think it'd be that powerful...and I'm glad you liked it tho...my other stories are just off the link from my username. |
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Wow. I didn't cry, but I could feel myself starting to choke up, you know that feeling in your throat when you know you could start crying? That was a really good fic, I feel so bad because Harry's son would grow up without his parents just like he did, but such is life, and such is fanfiction! Keep up the good work!! |
Author Feedback: Yup, I know that feeling, definitely...I had it all the while writing the fic and listening to the linked song for inspiration...I just wanted to show that Harry's son can be as resilient and resourceful as his father "once was"...I'm glad you liked it, and more is to come from my other stories! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/07
This was a great one-shot. It was sad but still very good. I hope to see something new from you soon. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you enjoyed it...and you will see something new soon in the face of a new chapter of Full Circle |
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omg that was so sad! well any way that was a great story!i cant wait to read the rest of your stories!  |
Author Feedback: I'm happy you enjoyed it...my other stories are a click away.  |
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jediyodaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/12/07
what a fantastic story.its a real tearjerker. I cannot stop my tears from falling. |
Author Feedback: Glad you liked the story...I tailored it specifically for the purpose of sadness... |
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Author Feedback: Well...it was meant to cause emotion, but I didn't know the story would resonate so much in your instance...in any case, I'm glad you think it's an OK story, even if you hate sad stories... |
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SummerUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/12/07
oh my god. that was so sad. i mean, it hurt to read this. my chest god really heavy and...it was all so sad.
so i guess that means you succeeded in making a lovely fic. very nice. |
Author Feedback: Thanks.
The purpose of the story was to make strong feelings surface, and it seems you felt something when you read it...and I'm glad you approve of the quality of the writing.
Cheers,
gti88 |
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That's beautiful. Sad as hell, but beautiful. It reminds me of my favorite story, 'Survivor'. It is a heart-breaking thing to think of two people who love each other so much, being torn apart. Sadder still is that parents would be taken from their children the way you've written here.
I didn't expect to feel so strongly when I clicked on this story...but I am really glad I did.
Regards,
the_scribbler
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Author Feedback: Hey,
I'm sorry for the delay in responding...Christmas and computer problems are to blame for that
I'm very glad that you felt strongly about the story...I was aiming to rise that particular feeling out of the reader when I was writing it. And yes, there is a parallel between Harry being an orphan and the child in this story...
Thanks once again for reading and reviewing, it's much appreciated.
gti88 |
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