frostyausSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 24/07/09
not a bad story. we do need more though. you've stopped mid way through |
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Where did you go? This one one of my favorite stories that I was following. But you vanished! Please, come back! This is such a great story! I neeeed this story! Update! Please! ...please? |
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ASSHOLEUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/07/08
I think it's safe to assume that you are either dead, or in prison. To bad, I really liked this story. |
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story is awesome, writing is good.
I got no complaints except you did one small mistake.
harry can't touch the snitch without it being keyed to him. |
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That conversation between Harry and Petunia has to be one of the best I've read in any fanficion; and trust me, I've read a lot.
On to the next! |
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I'm going to wager a guess there is something special about the roof of the school, but hold back a speculation it's just him learning a new skill.
I like your interpretation of Dumbledore - well-written, well-thought out and well presented. I look forward to more interaction with him.
The dreams are somewhat curious, but also somewhat frustrating as a reader, because they seem to be almost a side-not, whereas I know from experience with storytelling, that they are probably signs and portents of things to come. Important ones, at that.
None the less, this continues to be an excellent read. |
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This is very good so far; your attention to detail, especially sensory impressions, is impressive.
You have me hooked into the story and have me eager to read more. I can't wait to see the talk between Harry & Dumbledore.
I'm curious to see how you advance the H/Hr storyline, but your author's note at the beginning was very comforting in that regard.
On to the next! |
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Great story so far, please update, it has been a while.
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reeferUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 17/04/08
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liking the story, hope you update soon. kinda wondering where you are going with the crazy DADA teacher though. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 21/03/08
Has this story been abandoned? Almost 2 months since the last chapter was posted, quite a long time if you want to have dedicated readers. |
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HcintaHrUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/03/08
This is fantastic piece of work. Pls update soon!!! Many fans of yours are waiting!! |
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EvernightSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 17/03/08
Well, excellent story so far, I really like it. The structure is similar to what one should expect from a real Harry Potter book. The way Harry and Hermione's relationship is evolving is great, gradual, without rushing it, just the way I like it.
In you Author's Note you said you had 23 chapters done, and yet there's only 18 posted, the last one uploaded two months ago; I hope you didn't decide to abandon this story, I'm really looking forward to read the next chapters, so I'm adding your fic to my Favourite Stories.
Keep it up! |
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RinnbakuSigned | Chapter : 18 | Date : 27/02/08
Harry's got his work cut out for him... Wood's team was a well oiled machine with at least a whole year of practice together, and then they all graduated or left... Harry has to start from scratch... At least he'll have 'Mione to cheer him up, as well as Katie to help!
TTFN
Rinn ^_^ |
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RinnbakuSigned | Chapter : 17 | Date : 26/02/08
And so Hermione begins to test teh waters! Funn Fluff!
TTFN
Rinn ^_^ |
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