lol..wow that was bloody brilliant.now i am not a giggly person, but you had me giggling.
very well written, loved it.

haha harry did seem a little weird but it was funny...i could totally see harry and ron doing that to hermione

Viopathartic, I've read this story more than once and every time I read it, I howl, even though I know what's coming. It's been some months since I looked through the HHr stories here but I just stumbled on this title and haven't even read it yet but just thinking of it made my face crack into a huge grin and a little tear came to my eye. This is still one of the funniest things I've ever read. That's staying power. Thanks for the laughs.

Poor Muggle... Didn't know what 'e was getting into, did 'e? Lucky that 'Arry didn' hex 'im inta next week, the daft sod... As if 'Mione would date any less of a man than 'Arry Potter... *snorts indignantly*

TTFN
Rinn ^_^

hello, I am a reader who has enjoyed your story, blah blah blah..hahahahha this was fantastic. It was refreshing. As much as I love the Potter universe with it's magic and strange creatures and death defying situations, I very much prefer finding stories of this kind. The simple ones that give us a peek into their lives when they're not fighting crime. This was amusing. I loved the Potter pencil puppet piece. Though I think it ended a little too abruptly, but then thinking on it, the ending fit. It was playful and sweet. Very nice. Now I am off to make a dent in reading your many works.

Pretty sweet . And I didn't actually expect the "new girlfriend/boyfriend" twist at the end. Also, loved the "pencil play" . Poor John...
Cheers,
JanieB

lol, had a good luagh on that one, creepy but nice.

I can actually see Harry do that.

especially to defend his girlfriend.

Always fun to watch Harry scare away potential suitors. I'm sure the timing of their hookup was not entirely coincidence. Fun, cute little story. Really enjoyed it. Thanks!

LOL! Harry seemed a bit mad until the end there. Excellent work.

Most definitely my favorite story for you, really! I loved the twist that HHr are already together before the poor guy comes to pick Hermione up. I dialogue is sweet, the characters are endearing, and plot is lovely.

Very nice work!

much love, jae

well, that was a cute chuckle. IT's short, but a nice one. Well worth the time. I usually avoid oneshots, but a friend insisted I read this, and was glad I did. Nice work.

I found this one-shot to be really funny. You are an awsome writer.

Ahahhaaa~ This was totally hillarious. I've read several fics where Harry takes the 'father' routine for Hermione's suitors, but never one so funny!

great i loved it!!!

p.s: plz update A CLUB and DAMN CAR as soon as
possible

That was incredibly cute. I like the pencil John and pencil Hermione. A cute little bed time story .

Thanks