That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

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i quiet like it don't undertand the entire elders bisuness. But sounds like a good idea.
don't have hary captured that would suck.

Update soon

LMAO!!! "I'm revoking Spear's innocence,"

Getting sick of her music? Is that what she was doing? Making music? Sheesh! All this time I thought it was some bovine mating ritual whaling farmers used to help the cows mate with bulls!! Goes to show what I know. I'm so out of the loop!

Anywhoo.... nice plot, original, good writing, a little humor sprinkled in.... let's see where you take this.

Thanks for sharing your story.

careless tenage years, i think i ve head a fic before were harry got the alias of nicholas cliffmore befre, but i cant be sure, let's see what hapens next.

interesting beggining, hopefully harry will have time to get over his grief and also train and mature so that he can face his destiny so to speak head on, fullfiling the prophecy.

so now he's training, with his friends not having a clue where he is? How cowardly of him to tak that choice.

ok, since you want constructive criticism... there's no bloody way Harry would leave his friends back, even if he was tired of dumbledore's tactics.

Hi there

Well this two chapter were completely different from your first story, well structure and more detail, I just could help laugh about Kazu it's really funny, good work so far, I'm looking forward for the next


Ana

OK you've whetted my appetite and I'm ready for main course and dessert.

Different but intriguing.
FS

Nice to see that you decided to contiune your story . I read it a few months ago and really like it. Keep the good work.

Ana

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.