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Aww, very cute fic. Though because I'm weird my favorite line was:
He’d defeated the most evil wizard who’d ever lived with a well-timed Expelliarmus!
I just busted out laughing when I read that. I always envisioned the final battle in my head to be at least a chapter long, not two spells.
Anyways, I really liked you fic. Great fluff!! |
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Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it  |
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LissanneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/12/07
I specifically asked in the sign up posts for this fest that people do not archive their fics anywhere else before the fest is over. That is a standard request for all the fests I've seen over the years. I am really disappointed and annoyed that you couldn't wait a few weeks and ignored the request. |
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Jo BobSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/12/07
Wow! I want to commend you for your excellent work on this chapter. The development was smooth and not rushed and your characterizations and dialogue were appropriate and very well written! Don't stop writing! Cheers!
Jo Bob |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I do plan to keep writing, but this is the only chapter. The fic is complete as is. Sorry about that! It said, "Just a little one-shot, Anne!"  Happy holidays. |
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usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/07
That was completely cute. I absolutely love it. Very nice and subtle. It wasn't crazy. I really liked how fluffy it was, but it wasn't overly done. I'm glad that you decided to write this. |
Author Feedback: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. This was fun to write. |
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Mary6707Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/12/07
Now that's a Christmas treat!! I do so love when they realize they can be together. They should be together.  Very sweet, I like that Ron encourages the whole thing. |
Author Feedback: Yes, they SHOULD be together *looks shiftily at a certain clueless author*  Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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Author Feedback: I've always thought that Harry is generally clueless about emotions, especially his own. Ron isn't the sharpest knife in the drawer on some things, but I think he's sharped than Harry sometimes about feelings. Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed reading this  |
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Cool, i like it!
Its fuffy, it can make someone happy! lol
Its nothing special, it was very objective, but thats not necessarily bad...! |
Author Feedback: Um...thanks, I guess  |
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extremely nice - although Harry must have taken some hits to the head if it takes him years to gather up the courage to 'talk' to her about his feelings.
I do like the touch with the ornaments - a nice and well known tradition.
warm regards |
Author Feedback: LOL we know Harry has taken a few hits to the head  Actually I don't think he knew what his feelings were until shortly before this story. The ornaments seemed like a good moment for some feelings to bubble up for both of them  Thanks for reviewing. |
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That was sooo adorable!!! OMG!!! I love harmony and cute holiday stories like this one! I almost wish it were longer! |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. I think it was about as long as it wanted to be  |
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gorgeous one shot - loving the christmas fluff! keep up the good work |
Author Feedback: Thanks - I'm glad you liked it  |
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great one shot! i loved it .. you did a great job describing harry's feelings! |
Author Feedback: Thank you  |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/07
Spot-on characters always make a story better and you've done a great job with both Harry and Hermione here. I really enjoyed reading this; it was anice start to the holiday season. Thanks for sharing. |
Author Feedback: Thanks for the very nice review  |
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Pyro15Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/07
aww, a sweet little xmas story, perfect way to start out the holidays in my opinion. |
Author Feedback: thank you  |
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alruneSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/12/07
awwww that is too cute... i love all these christmas stories that are poppin up... tis the season. very excellent work (as always!) |
Author Feedback: Thank you. "As always"? I'm just happy to be writing again (especially H/Hr  |
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