Oh, I finally read the story, and it's so beautiful. I wanted to cry for Hermione's feelings in the first and second chapter, and the way Harry talked to her... it was simply amazing. Keep writing like that |
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Ohhh...  That was one angst filled chapter from one point on! To be fair though, I  Love how you've made Harry so assertive but not so much that he knew would hurt her physically. Trying to get through to her was another thing... by the sounds of it she really needed to hear it from someone very soon! |
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niamhUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/01/08
i really enjoyed your fic, particularly the back story and epilogue of ron. |
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Aww what a sweet ending, I liked it a lot... it describes perfectly how their relationship is and should be if they were married... nice story  |
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ClaireUnsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 04/01/08
I'm a little disappointed with this epilogue. It lacks the stunningly realistic dialogue that is so characteristic of your writing. I'm a devoted fan of yours (seeing an updated chapter of one of your fics brightens my day!), but this chapter let me down. However, that won't stop me re-reading all of your other fics until you update your WIPs! |
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sweet. all the reasons why 'nineteen years later' seems so wrong are covered here. good work. again. |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 03/01/08
about time Hermione wised up and realised just how much she loves Harry.....what a silly girl she can be. |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/01/08
Great ending! I liked that it was from Ron's point of view rather than Harry's or Hermione's, and I liked how introspective he was even as the current events were related. Seeing Harry and Hermione's relationship from Ron's eyes when Ron isn't bitter or angry about it is a rare treat, and I enjoyed how you contrasted Ron and Hermione's relationship and marriage to Harry and Hermione's relationship. |
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Tank03Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/01/08
A nice and fitting ending to this story. I really liked how you had Ron articulate the complexity if their relationship and how Harry and Hermione always just seemed to be.
Thanks for sharing, and I'm looking forward to reading whatever you may have for us next. |
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Great chapter! I loved the feelings you portrayed from Ron. It was like an epiphany. I love it when people realize some things they didn't understand before. A wonderful job doing that exactly with Ron.
Read you soon!
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/01/08
Great ending to a really nice fic. Good job, can't wait to read more from you! |
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That was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
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ears91Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/01/08
Very nice story! Ron's perspective was fantastic, its nice to see all three of them happy. |
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Very unique way to finish. It's also nice to see a more adult Ron, the erruption scenario gets quite tiresome fast. Good work. |
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kasmira36Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 03/01/08
(Sigh) Why, oh why THEIR creates never saw what we've always seen, how THEY were Right Together.
By the way, haven't you updated 'The Truth About Love' yet? I'm so looking forward to see it,
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