That was very sweet and fluffy! *goes of in search of insulin*

One of the most original and humorous stories i have ever read!!!Great work!!

hi there! I really like the story... it's so cute and nicely done... hope you'll write more stories similar to this one...

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That was fun, i laughed to myself several times during the fic. And it was really well written too, its getting harder and harder to find fics with a good idea and solid writing behind them.

I also know that this fanfic is basically ficing another fanfic, but i still found it original enough to warrant reading.

All in all, great job!

Sweet... A comedy of errors

And I never realized how crafty LAvender coul be...

Overall, a very fun story.

Really good keep writing. Not so bad for the first time

haha that\'s cute. really sweet. loved the idea about the love fruit. great job!

I really thought that whole fic was cute. Lol. I wouldn't've thought that Parvarti and Lav did that to them. Well, I mean, I can see them doing it to them, but I wasn't expecting it. Lovely job at this. I really enjoyed it.

That was a wonderful chapter. I am confused as to why Harry would lick her cheek. Well, at least they finally like each other. I'm glad they have that out now.

That was a great chapter. I really enjoyed it. I wonder what is going to happen this time. They keep almost kissing and then they don't. I absoultely loved it when Harry stared up (accidently). It was quite amusing.

This ounds like a promising fic. I do like places where they get stuck. Woohooo..they're in the greenhouse, so that has got to suck for them. Very interesting. This proposes a lot of ideas.

nice little story.cute and sweet.whr\'s other parts?am waiting...hehehe i did like the knickers part.

i loved the end it was great i laughed so hard i hope to see more fo your work on here
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Aww. They're so perfectly awkward. As friends they know each other well, but with the potential for more than that....

great job. this story was amazing! i cant wait to read more of your stories!