Hey, that was awesome too! (i read locked, shocked etc tonight as well) You really do write extremely well. The expression is good, dialogue is natural and the scenes are obviously well thought out and well crafted. It really feels like i could just 'watch' the story in my head.

So yeah, another great job!

Well that certainly was extremely cute. Lovely job. I enjoyed that while I was not studying for my exam. Lol. Very cute that Ron and Luna made out..very cute.

lol, it was funny, really...
its good not to have nay deaths sometimes...
I like the humor of it...

lol, it was funny, really...
its good not to have nay deaths sometimes...
I like the humor of it...

mmm.. maybe i missed it but what did ron promise Luna when he saved her? but overall it was fun reading it

*laughs* I love it!! Hermione definitely gets a bit too wrapped up in things and I love how this ended with her & Harry getting wrapped up in each other. Good on them!!

I daresay there'll be all sorts of stories about them in the rumor/gossip mill before too long after Lavender and Parvati see them - if there's not already since gossip somehow gives the impression of traveling faster than light.

I liked this story very much.It is so cute and entertaining.

Brilliant work you've done here! Made me laugh a lot Hope you keep writing fics like this one I'm adding you to my favorites

aw this was a really sweet story and it was very fun to read. i'm glad that ron wasn't upset though it was a little creepy that he was watching hermione sleep...

I never get tired of reading any scenario, not matter how many times its been done. Everyone usually finds a way to make it there own and puts their own little twist into it just as you have done. I totally enjoyed the story, the writting, and most importantly the way you wrote their all the character, as none of them seemed out-of-character to me. All in all a great one shot!

Very funny story! I enjoyed it so much that I wish that it were longer! Keep up the good work!

awe that was so cute wow so much embarrassement for Harry and Hermione but that was cute I loved it and here's my review bye bye

I ,iked this one-shot a lot. I hope to read something else from you soon.

that was bloody briliant! rather funny, it was sad too........ woiw it had it all..... maybe you should make a few more chapters of our couples ascapades??? mmm?????

Heh. That was fun. The Luna thing was a little out of the blue, though.