I really enjoyed this story, but the ending seems rather rushed, like it would of been nice to what happene with Ron and Hermione or why Lavender attacked her? The stories pace was realy good, buts its kinda like it suddenly speeds up at the end.....

Did they ever find out what Lavender's motive and reasoning behind the attacks were? Will you write an epilogue or sequel?

Did they ever find out what Lavender's motive and reasoning behind the attacks were? Will you write an epilogue or sequel?

I wish he didn't leave after compelting the mission, but anyhow it's a very good story

i'm not soooo sure but i think i reviewed this already hahah! one thing is sure though, i dig this fic.. loved it from head to toe :wink: and wouldn't mind reading it again after sometime

Ok, I loved the orignial story and I love this one too, but I need a sequel! Does Harry give up SAS to be with Hermione? What happens when he tells Ron? The Weasleys? Does Harry Potter come back to the wizarding world? You can't just leave us hanging!

that as a fantastic story ! ! !

may harry and hermione prosper! ! !

wow! i am at a loss for words.
*grovels at authors feet* is there a part 2?

See? This is what happens when I get sick. I miss all sorts of lovely things - like an encore to one of my favorite fics *ever*!

Can order a clone of this Harry from Santa? Please?? I'll take very good care of him. Really. He seems to have had a hard life, so Hermione can take care of the original and I can take care of the clone.

Why do I get the feeling you're not buying?

Dammit. Foiled again!

Well, okay, so I must tell you that Harry should be thankful to have this excuse to come to Hermione because he clearly hasn't gotten over her. Good boy!

There aren't many stories out there that show both point of views, and I think that's a shame. I can't tell you how much more I enjoyed re-reading Someone to Watch Over Me now that I know what Harry was thinking. Fantastic!

I'm also glad that you went a bit further in this story and showed that Harry was determined to find a way to make their relationship work. My mind just boggles with ideas about their future...

Thanks so much for deciding to write this - it was such a treat!!

I already reviewed on SU, but I so think this story needs more reviews than 20!

Wow. What a way to start a *ahem* relaxing Saturday morning! I always have loved your stories. But, more importantly, I love your take on the more adult H/Hr. Very few loves are all romantic roses and softly making love. It's nice to read a story that very realistically depicts the raw desire of "want" and "need" that a relationship can have. As always, I look forward to reading whatever you come up with next.

Interesting story; very credible too and excellently written. Great job!I like how you didn\'t do a PWP, though it would have been easy, and that you din\'t let them kiss right away, but descibed what they both went through. An amazing fic!

i adore this fic (the first version and this one) tis was a great companion piece, kudos on it

Whoa. Nicely done. I stopped and sent it to my hubby half way through, knowing he'd enjoy the set up and all.

Is this a one-shot, or are you going to continue it? I think you captured Harry's voice very well, but you leave me wondering about things, like Ron's reaction. And did Lavender's hate stem from jealousy over Ron as I assumed? If so, did he ever take back up with her or was she misguidedly still into him after he'd used her and then dropped her for Hermione? Poor girl in some ways, at least from her school day's POV.

Hello! I´ve read this fic at live joruanl already. I´m just commenting because I loved it and because I need portkey points

once more...thanks for sharing!