AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 10 | Date : 17/04/08
Well written and very entertaining, you have captured the characters emotions exactly as portrayed by JKR and without cluttering the story with sub-plots. Bravo and well done ! |
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BeppoSigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 23/03/08
Hi there
I realy liked this story, and I hope you will write more soon.
Beppo Gunar
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Author Feedback: Thanks,
I hope i Can finish the next chapter soon  |
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This was quite the chapter I might add. My favorite might have been the part right at the very end. So I can't wait to read more.
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This was quite the chapter I might add. My favorite might have been the part right at the very end. So I can't wait to read more.
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Oh wow that is terrible, I remember losing my grandma and it was horrible. It's a terrible part of life and no one should have to go through it but it happens, no matter how awful it may be to go through.
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Oh wow that is terrible, I remember losing my grandma and it was horrible. It's a terrible part of life and no one should have to go through it but it happens, no matter how awful it may be to go through.
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dun dun dun.... yet again. I'm excited to see how this next chapter will turn out. It will be a good one I am sure, as it always is.
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dun dun dun.... yet again. I'm excited to see how this next chapter will turn out. It will be a good one I am sure, as it always is.
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Yet another great chapter and I just can't wait to read even more of this story. I'm liking the part about Hermione moving in with Harry though.... It is sad about her parent's making her choose though.
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dun dun dun.... I guess we will have to see where this goes.... It looks like a good one though....
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dun dun dun.... I guess we will have to see where this goes.... It looks like a good one though....
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This is so sad....  I just want to read more though....
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This is so sad.... I just want to read more though....
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Oh wow, this is pretty intense.... I would hate to have to live with that.... The thought that you parent's didn't really want to be around you/in your life anymore.
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Oh wow, this is pretty intense.... I would hate to have to live with that.... The thought that you parent's didn't really want to be around you/in your life anymore.
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