AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/08/08
I love this song and this story is good too.  |
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Awww... that was quite an emotional piece! I feel kind of bad for Harry - it must have sucked to be him on the Auror trip, thinking the love of his life didn't love him anymore. I do think that you could have found a more plausible way for Harry to die, though... an Auror suicide mission? Is it strange that I found the concept of Hermione dying next to Harry's tombstone romantic? I hope not 
Looking forward to the next chapter of Moving On  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/12/07
Nice little ficlet, atlthough I honestly think you need to make some changes to the characters ages. As Hermione wouldn't be "infirm" at 75, and definatly not in a nursing home. Examples include McGongall, who is 75, and still going strong teaching during Harry's first year.
Dumbledore who was listed (by JKR) in an interview, as being 150 etc. She also clearly states in the same interview that she sees Wizards and Witches live a lot longer than muggles (baring as she said serious magical diseases, of which she said there were a few).
At any rate, it doesn't affect the story any I reckon. Just would be a good thing to know I guess if you do anymore of these type of fics. |
Author Feedback: Ah yes, the age thing. But if you read back, you can see she has cancer. I doubt that cancer cares that she is only 75. With Hermione being muggle born, I would imagine that she may still be susceptible to some major muggle ailments, such as cancer.
But I will definitely keep in mind should I choose to let any future witches or wizards die simply of old age.
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bisay921Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/11/07
I couldn't cry!!! Because most of my officemates are here infront of me!!! But really, that was sooooo sad. I'd have been bawling my eyes out if I was alone.
Thank you for a sad and yet beautiful story...   |
Author Feedback: I am glad that it moved to you to almost tears! Maybe I should have put a tear-jerk-alert on future sad ones so that you can choose to read in the privacy of your own home and cry.
Don't feel bad, I still cry when I read it... and I wrote it, so I should be immune. |
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i'm not crying. i swear. these are not tears.
love it. X:[ |
Author Feedback: Don't worry, your tears are safe with me... lol...
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and sorry the reply took so long. |
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prongs_69Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 25/11/07
OH MY GOD! that was astounding! but ever so sad.*note to self* NEVER read angsty fics b4 bedtime...........  it was amazing writing though i have to admit............. |
Author Feedback: LOL...
Imagine walking around with that for days, not certain if you should or shouldn't post it!
Glad you liked, and sorry for not replying sooner. |
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CathyDSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 24/11/07
Lovely fic. Left me with a sad little smile. It's so sad that Harry died before Hermione could tell him that she *did* love him (even though I'm sure he really knew that), and that he never knew of his child. I feel badly for Harry at the end, having his Nana pass away on him. You did a nice job of portraying real emotion in such a short fic.
~Cat~ |
Author Feedback: Thank you so much for your review, and sorry it's taken me so long to reply.
Thanks for the compliment. My goal as a writer is to have you (the reader) feel what I feel when I am writing it. I worked for 5+ years in the medical field, and we dealt primarily with cancers and such. I drew on the patients and their families when I wrote that (though I can not stand to work for such medicine anymore). I fell in love with too many of our families (I guess I got too close). Anyways, it was devastating when we lost the ones we were pulling for.
I had to tell my supervisor about one man she had been battling with for nearly a decade when he passed away. She'd been away for Christmas. Anyways, that sadness... I drew on those tears.
Anyway, thank you again. I enjoyed writing it. |
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wow, that was really sad, though I must confess, the two Harry's were rather confusing lol, no, I guess it wasn't all sad, kind of bittersweet. though I know how hard it is to lose someone right in front of you and not be able to do anything, I was holding my mom's hand when she passed. It isn't easy. |
Author Feedback: I can see where Harry and the Grandson Harry would get confusing, as I am sure if the James and his grandson James had lived, it would have been too. I needed them both to be named Harry, though, for the scene of Hermione passing from the arms of one Harry Potter into the loving arms of the Harry Potter she loved intimately.
I have never been to a funeral, though many in my life have passed away. I have been there, holding the hands of many patients when we told them that there was only a finite amount of time left. I couldn't even begin to imagine what it would be like to loose my mother (after all, she's only 46).
I am sorry for the loss of your mother. I know that there aren't even words to describe the range of feelings you must have felt.
Thank you again for reading and reviewing, and sorry it took so long to reply. As you know, not all of my stuff is this sad. |
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That was beautiful. I was almost crying. . This was realy good. realy realy good. good jobe. |
Author Feedback: Almost? Almost crying? Then I have FAILED! You should be crying! (J/K)
Thanks for reading and reviewing, and sorry the reply has taken sooo long. |
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Damn.
Damn good story. For some reason, I could Hermione wanting to do that when she went, as Dumbledore said, to "the next great adventure." Well done. |
Author Feedback: It's always great to get a review from familiar names. I am glad you liked it, and sorry it took so long to reply. Hope you read the new story. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/07
that was so touching. you may not see it but i am literally crying when i read you fic and as i am writing this. Dangit! its was so sweet and touching. |
Author Feedback: I accept your tears! Thank you for reading and reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 23/11/07
I liked it a lot. You always write very well. I hope to see something else from you soon. |
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