papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 30/05/08
*cries* So sad. But with a good ending. Harry ends up with Hermione and the rest in Heaven. So yay. ^_^ |
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Even if i say it'll be alright, still i hear you say you want to end your lifeee..LOL! i know this song. i have it on my ipod. lol. good job though. the song in the middle distracted me but its okay. |
Author Feedback: Yeah, many people say that the song does distract from it, but it has to be written that way, sorry!
I really liked this song for a bit, and it just came to me when I was sitting outside of school in the car, waiting. I wasn't sure I got the lyrics right, because I had to listen to them and write them (I know I could have looked them up, but it wasn't convenient.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, sorry it took so long for me to reply. |
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hp-n-hgSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/11/07
was this supposed to be a one shot? its a good story but sad i like the song but i would have never thought to put it into a fanfic. that was really clever
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Author Feedback: Yeah, it's a one-shot, for sure. I am glad that you liked it, and sorry it took me so long to reply back. Shame on me. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/07
w.ww.wwwwwwww!!!!!!! Bu..but.. Harry! What!He was going to live! And then he stumbled and he's dead! What! Hermione had convinced him to live! What?!
Wow. That was really good. Good job. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. |
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I love it. those words are plain and simple. just like the words you wrote. i simply love it. it brought tears to my eyes. |
Author Feedback: I love it when I move my readers to emotions... be it happy or sad. Sorry it took so long to reply, but it is as it is... all is well, though, and I hope that you will take a look at my other works. |
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Wow. That's an ending I didn't see coming. Really. I thought he was going to his house and get a dog. It's a bit sad, but I don't mind that much. He went home.
The only nitpick I have is the lyrics in the song. They take away from the story. You could put them at the end or the beginning, preferably at the end. All in all, good job. Keep writing.  |
Author Feedback: I think that your sentiments about the lyrics are right on and should I be compelled to do this again, I will include the lyrics at the end.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, as always. |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/11/07
I really thought he was going to live and go home and than you hit us with him stumbling as he tries to get off the bridge. bravo! |
Author Feedback:
I do what I can to keep you all on your toes.
Sorry it took so long to reply to your review. |
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How Ironic...
Sitting on the ledge of a bridge, debating with oneself on whether or not to jump.
Yet when you choose life, some rock seems fit to make you stumble and plummet to your death... 
-shrug-
Oh well, nice oneshot... I'll have to listen to that song... don't think I've heard it before. |
Author Feedback: LOL.
I have to agree with you, and definitely recommend listening to the song. It took a few listens, and then I was like I HAVE to write it. Now, of course, the story plays out in my head every time I hear it, but that's fine. |
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