Well written and very humorous. Throughout the while story I was entertained be the way you wrote the story from Hermione\'s question down to Harry\'s compliance of her favor. Keep up the good work and keep writing I\'d love to read more of it.

Aww! This is so cute! I love it and I laughed.

Awesome story!

short and very funny to be honest, but i liked it.
Nice job

hey that was cute ! good job, now i'm gonna read the sequel!!!

yes, actually, that was quite cute. and i'm guessing that hermione probably doesn't realize by now just how amazing harry thinks she is, even with the joke about him "sweeping girls off their feet."

THis is a very cute fic. I was looming for a few good stoies and saw you sequel. I will be reading that next!

Ahaha! I like this one! Excellent!

Eheheehe, favourite quote:

"Oh wow," she thought, "oh God. Yes, more of that!"

Ahahahaah! Hilarious! I'm going to read the sequel right now!

-Kourtz

love it! i found this story on ff.net and i wanted to read more so here i am =]

Intresting and quite well written, despite a spelling error here and there.
More details on the shower incident should be welcome

WOW, this was very very very very very very very cute.

awww, this was so cute, but you could have made it longer, make them actually have a good snog!

A little more practice should do the trick. think they will agree?

Ow...its not that it isnt good, but i fell like it needs a end... i mean... a next end chapter unless...
Byeee

I thought that was absolutely adorable! The detail was fine, but it could have used a little more at the end! Nevertheless, I really enjoyed it. I was practically fanning myself until Hermione got all weak-kneed. That made me smile. Of course, what girl wouldn't while kissing Harry? Very good job!

you should make a second chapter! please please please pelase please!!