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Yay! They got back together! That was a wonderful ending! I'm incredibly excited for your new fic and will have to remember to check your page for news. |
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great, story, though kind of sad, but than again, that is life in general sometimes. Life can take its toll on you, but as long as you have people that love you still, you can overcome just about anything |
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I know how poor James is feeling. there have been times when I have come fairly close to ripping my dads head off, the only thing keeping me from doing it is knowing that he is grieving too. It is just that our ways of grieving conflict so much, and my dad doesn't know how to help me, lol, he just makes it worse sometimes, but I know he tries. Anyway, I was just wondering what the timeline of that chapter was because it seemed like one minute he was just coming back to the school, and then all of a sudden he had been back for a while. Anyway, the chapter was well written, though hard to read emotionally because of James |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 24/11/07
well its over  its sad but it was a good place to end it at. and I hope to see what else you have in stored for us with other stories! |
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KelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 24/11/07
YAY!! Ohh, this was so good! Now I must ask you... PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER J/L STORY! you MUST!! =] |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 24/11/07
so he knows that it was summer!thats interesting, wow. so hes snapping at everyone hes really mad. but ya thats normal for someone that just lost their parents but he needs to snap out of it!update soon |
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oh no! I was afraid that was going to happen, but I was afraid that just Mrs. Potter would be killed, I never saw Mr. Potters death coming. And poor James. I feel so bad for everyone, I wish they could wake up and it would all be a horrible dream. |
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i had no idea. but i knew something was bound to be odd or jusst plain sad. good job. |
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kelseyUnsigned | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/11/07
im all happy. i just got out of school for a week. then you go and make me cry? thanks! lmao! great chapter, as well as the last one! cant wait for more |
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omg!!! u killed them.. i am soo sad its soo sad. i hope you update reaally soon because this left me shaken up...its really well written (also, im glad she finally saw the real side of striker i hate him...oh bts what happened to summer???) |
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i'm cold this room is freezing and my eyes are beginning to water I want to cry but there's this kid sitting next to me oh well |
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Wow...that was a very emotionally complex chapter. My emotions were all over the charts! Awesome, I can't wait to see what happens. Did you purposely leave Summer out? Was this Summer's plan? |
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i hate deaths... but i guess it is essential to the plot... wats up wit summer... no word of whether she was also hurt( high chance seeing that she was the one who ordered the attack)... the tempo of the story is going great... do update soon  |
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i kinda expected something more and dramatic to happen between james and lily... but it will come in the later chapters i guess it will come in the later chapters.... |
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Kandy123Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 20/11/07
NOOOOOOO!Thats terrible!they died!I really didn't see that one coming!are they going to figure out that it was summer?and whats with striker and lily?update soon |
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