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Cool first chapter! I like where you seem to be going so far! |
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope that you eventually got a chance to read the entire 3 parts...
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Jesus Christ. I'm sorry but what a freaking psycopath, I am a bit pissed at Lily and VERY angry at James and Sirius, but I can definitely tell where Lily is coming from with that stuff and Striker, but I thought James would have been more ... appreciative of muggle things. I mean his cousin would have DIED if it wasn't for a muggle safety procedure. Whatever. Its very good, though there might be a few mistakes. Keep writing PLEASE! |
Author Feedback: LOL
Yeah, I still make mistakes. No one is perfect, lol.
Thank you for reading and reviewing. |
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hermione5Signed | Chapter : 11 | Date : 31/12/07
i like these two stories they are wonderful and i think i'm becoming a liker of lily/james stories...i love the couple but never gotten into the stories but i think i am starting to  |
Author Feedback: I am glad that my creations are opening you up to the wonderful world before Harry Potter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 11/12/07
I was suppose to turn the computer off hours ago but this 2nd story for the collection is just so good. Just to get to this chapter i have batteled through a missing batterry, an emergency shut down and over 10 internet failing though the story made up for it.  |
Author Feedback: I hate when I have that same problem! So many nights my housemates will hear the wailing "No!" when things just don't go my way when I want to read something.
Thanks! |
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AphySigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 03/12/07
Oh wow. I really don't know what to say.
I have to admit, I stalked off the story twice in the middle because I was just so annoyed at what the James and Lily were doing. I actually didn't find Summer that bad...Striker was the one that had me growling at my monitor =P
Striker was an amazing character. Amazingly annoying that is. I couldn't read any part with him in it without getting angry...haha. Kudos if that's how you wanted him to turn out though =P
I loved the ending though. The "forever" line just made everything nice and happy again.
Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go find some way to smash some imaginery Strikers. |
Author Feedback: I was definitely going for the 'yell at the computer screen' and 'I can't believe you idiots!', so if that's a bit like your reaction, then YES, I was sucessful. I wanted him to be hated, and to be angry! Angry is good!
Hope the smashing went well. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 11 | Date : 28/11/07
Ohhhh, Another hit, this one was perfect !!! Tell,me a little secret where do you get your inspiration from ?! And how do you prevent writers block?! BEcause when I get them boy do I get them, lets just put it like this if I start one and I get writers block I may never finish it.But other than that the story was awesome and I hope you write more ! |
Author Feedback: Well, since I don't actually have the means to contact you... I'll answer it here for you with hopes that you read it. Sorry it took so long, btw... internet issues.
Where do I get my inspiration from?
*Life, mainly, but a lot has to do with music and emotion. I listen to music when I write, usually, or anything but just talking (live people, movies are ok). It is alway auditory. The sound of water, the howl of the wind. Almost all of my stories are built on one single interaction (be it washing my hair in the sink at a rest stop or getting a glass of juice and the ice hitting the glass). Wow. That sounds nuts.
How do I prevent writer's block?
*I sit down every day and resolve to write at least one page (even if it is crap). I may never use it, but at least I am doing something. A lot of times, it is just random words and sentence, worthless as a whole, but you never know when one word might inspire a sentence, a sentence a paragraph, etc... Up until a few years ago, I never completed anything I have ever started, thus why some of the endings are weak. I am great at starts, but then I get lost or bored...
I hope that you find this, and that it helps. Thank you for reading and reviewing, and sorry it took so long. |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 28/11/07
ohhh this chapter is beautiful!!!!!!!! This story is going great ! You had me misting up there in the end(  ) |
Author Feedback: I am so happy that you got emotional. |
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piper_09Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 28/11/07
So far I love it and I love the fight though you should have made Lily draw blood, or did she ? I also love the line "but we all do things we normally wouldn't do when our love is not returned" be cause it is so very true, and when James comes in and and sits between them and then kisses her, oh do you know how to create twists |
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pstibbonsSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 26/11/07
The more I think about it, the more I see the whole James/Lily ship being most comparable to the Ron/Hermione ship. Well, not quite... unlike Ron, James has smarts. But like Ron, he has no respect for Lily's muggle roots. Why can't Lily date someone better, like Remus? |
Author Feedback: If I paired Remus and Lily over James and Lily, I would be burned at the stake!! Could you imagine? As it is, people are horrified that they had a relationship 4 years prior in my current J/L story.
And anyways, portkey would never allow it. |
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I'm glad that the ending was fluffy a little. I still feel bad for James but at least he still has his family. I think Lily did a great job being there for him and Striker didn't have a chance against James. Summer was just a pain in the butt and really should be guilty for setting up the attack. Keep Writing i can't wait for the next story you right. |
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oh it's done wow ok cool bye byes for now |
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oh it's done wow ok cool bye byes for now |
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hm dee hum de hum off to the next chapter I go |
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hey... dont mind me telling this... but after such a lot of drama and spice this is a kind of tame ending... pls dont feel bad... its nice only and a fitting end... but pretty tame... anyways.. de whole story as such was great |
Author Feedback: Talk about a delay in the whole reply to the review thing... oops... 
Yeah, I've never actually been very good at endings... starts and middles, yes, but endings... nope.
Hope this doesn't make you less likely to read anything else I'd write in the future. |
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hey... good to see that lily has broken up with striker.... took her long enough huh ??? well better late than never... summer's treatment was rather tame... i kind of expected more drama...!!! but it ws fine.... |
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