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maybe you can make a story as long as Harry Potter and the Sword of Gryffindor but a dark version do wat u like with ron just make harry go dark cos of somthing that happens to hermione and she then becomes the Dark Lady beside harry. so much fun can be had by those two maybe a dumble+weasly bashing one too ^^ they can do watever u think off to hermione to start them down to the dark side

awwww that was sucha sweet little ficlet! ehhehe i dont even know if im allowed to say sweet. considering the series but meh. very cute little scene. =)

It's always nice to see a new chapter from you. This one, is a bit different from the rest of the series, and wasn't what I was expecting. It had more symbolism and interaction between the two, while the previous ones had been more action-oriented. I admit I couldn't discern all the meaning of the symbolism, but then I didn't really take the time to reflect properly as I am pressed for time at the moment. I didn't expect to encounter something with as much symbolism that i had to think about when I read the chapter.

I must say, this is an incredible piece of work. It is dark, dreary, depressing and despicable, and I can give you no higher praise than that. I have read many stories on portkey, as well as other sites, and this is the first I have reviewed/replied to. I just love how it is madly chaotic, yet he is doing it all for Hermione, a sort of ultimate tradegy. Thank you for this series, keep up the good work.

P.S. Sword of Gryffindor is also a nice piece, comedic, uplifting and just plain fun.

My hat is off to you

This is a VERY DEPRESSING story!!! Please, make it happy!! Please!!!

Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can.

"Hermione cursed Voldemort. Because of that fiend, Hermione and her friends were kidnapped, constantly tortured, and repeatedly raped. And now, Harry was now nearly impossible to shop for."

I don't know who has a more morbid sense of humor - you for writing this, or me for thinking it's tremendously funny...

I really like this, the dark undertones, the pain... and I haven't even read any of your other works. I must go back and read them, you write wonderfully. Too many people struggle to write dark pieces of literature, they either make it too dark or not dark enough. You have the perfect balence.

Gosh, they are so twisted... I really love the symbolics [sp?] of the dead flowers it speaks/shows perfectly how much they are dead inside, how much they've degradeted [sp?]. I really like this series. It always leaves me refecting about the beauty of the world and normal life and family...
about the destroying influencew of the evil in our life, of the evil we often intentionaly or not, do in our life, how it may change the world around us...

Thank you for this series. It's very beautiful in its "twisted" way...

You write really well. I have enjoyed all of your stories. I hope you find your muse so you can continue with HP and the Sword of Gryffindor.

Wow.
It's amazing how you can write horror stories and comedy, two such different things, and be excellent at both.
This fic was awesome, just like the others. I'm looking forward to more of them.
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