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I love the ending. I really enjoy corny endings. I really enjoyed this story and Twisted as well. |
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Another good chapter in an excellent story. The last two sentence are the best in the chapter.  |
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it's a good ending! well i liked it.. it's not that rushed... i've seen worse  you did a good job |
Author Feedback: Well I'm glad you liked it  |
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Ten years huh? woaw... 
I LOVE DRACO!
I LOVE HIS INTENSE LOVE FOR GINNY!
I LOVE GINNY WAKING UP!
I LOVE DRACO GIVING HER WHAT SHE WANTS!
I LOVE FRANCE!
I LOVE THAT GINNY LOVES DRACO BACK!
I DON'T THINK ITS REALLY AS BAD AS YOU THINK MOOGLE!
I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY AS WELL!
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Author Feedback: Aw, thank you so much!! I was feeling all down because I just couldn't get this story to go how I wanted, but I'm glad to hear you liked it so much!
Thank you again! You really cheered me up with this review  |
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Your story is great. Don't worry about the writer's block. I've had one for at least a year and I'm just now starting to go back to it. You just have to get back up on the horse and ride again. It just takes time. This chapter was great. I loved how clearly the emotions were expressed, when that's done perfectly, your story is going to be loved. Just because there's more words than actual speaking parts doesn't mean that the story isn't great. Sometimes, you need more background music to make the music great. Great job! |
Author Feedback: Well I'm very glad to hear you liked it. I had so much planned for this story, but I just couldn't get it written. The two weeks I said that had passed was actually where the real story came into it, but every time I went to write it nothing would come. I knew what was going to happen, but it just wouldn't work. It was like the characters didn't want to go through all that struggle, and I just couldn't write it. So I eventually just gave up and skipped right to the end. I don't think it is THAT bad enough to be called a complete failure though.
For stories like this I generally don't have too much speaking. To me the feelings and actions speak louder than words, so I generally don't have that much conversation. It makes people find it easier to connect with the characters more.
In any case, thank you for your reviews. They really cheered me up |
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I think sometimes it doesn't matter how long or how short your chapter is but as long as you get the main point of the chapter across, that's all that matters. Great job! |
Author Feedback: I'm just used to writing 5000+ word chapters, lol. When I write something really short it just frustrates me because I know I can do better.
I'm glad you liked the chapter though. |
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Oh you're going to make me cry. A good thing though. That is incredible, I love that idea of Ginny waking up like a miracle after he left earlier. Ahh! What a wonderful chapter! Great job. |
Author Feedback: I know it's a little cliche, but I thought it went well with what I wanted. I really wanted to show the devastation of what it would mean for Draco to lose Ginny, and then the pure happiness of realising she is not gone. |
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Awww! That's a great ending to the first chapter! I just watched August Rush so I'm in a little more of an awe mode but still, I love your story! Great job. |
Author Feedback: Aw, thank you. I have not seen August Rush though. I confess I have no idea what that is  |
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More!!! I want more. Is that the end? I don\'t want it to be the end. It\'s really quite nice. sad but really hopeful at the same time. an enjoyable read. well done.
~ Lila |
Author Feedback: No that is not the end- far from it actually.
This fic, as I said in the a/n note, is being a real pain for me at the moment, so while I will try update as soon as I can I can't promise that it will be anytime soon. I just am having trouble actually getting the words on paper, nevermind that I already know what is going to happen.
Thank you for reviewing, and I will try to update it as soon as I can. |
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This chapter is very good. It has two conflicting tones. First its very sad then its gets hopeful. It really helps set up the story. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it, and yes it does indeed set up the story. This fic won't have any bad guys so to say, it really is just about two peopple finding their feet and love again, so I have to try and make it all fit nicely, lol.
Thanks for reviewing. |
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Awnn it's so sweet and so sad in the same time... you did a good job on the chapter... hope you can update soon!! |
Author Feedback: Well I'm glad you liked it anyway. I'll try update when I can.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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It's a short chapter but it's a really good one! loved it!! hope you can update soon |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you liked it!!
I'll try update soon. I can't make any promises though with university.
Thanks very much for reviewing! |
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Awnnn! that's sooo cute!!! she woke!! i'm so happy!! that was a really good chapter! loved it! and hope to read the next one soon! |
Author Feedback: I'll see how I go. I was really estatic to get that chapter up since I've had the worst writer's block lately, and it's coming back again, but hopefully it will not be so long before the next chapter is up.
I'm glad you liked it though. I don't usually like my chapters but I was really happy with that one, so it's nice to know you liked it too.
Thanks so much for reviewing!! |
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Good first chapter. I like how faithful Draco is. The last sentence is the best in the whole chapter. Please update soon.  |
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Fantastic! I can\'t wait to read more of Mending Hearts.
Keep up the fantastic work,
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Author Feedback: I'll hopefully be working on this one soon. I'm just finishing up another of my fics.
Thanks for reviewing!! |
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