JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 11/11/07
Awww, I liked "Seven Words"  (I think it's the sound of the double syllable in seven rather than the single one that is six). Why didn't you just make it, "But I don't think you are ugly"??? (Not a direct quote, I know!)   Ah well, a rose by any other name...  ...still a great little one-shot! 
JanieB
PS Day by Day?? Woh, that seems like an age ago now! Did you ever read the sequel, I wonder? |
Author Feedback: Someone pointed it out that, "But I don't think you're ugly" is six words, not seven. LOL I am definitely slow. Thanks (again)!
P.S. Yep. Read the sequel, read the D/G piece from it....*stops scaring you* |
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vlbuehleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/11/07
What a great, fluffy fic! I liked the way it was in letter format to Harry. I enjoyed how you contrasted what Viktor said to Harry's spontaneous words, and how that made the difference to Hermione. Her reasoning as to why she couldn't show her love was very much in character, and I enjoyed how Harry convinced her in the end. |
Author Feedback: I'm glad to see that I'm totally ruining these characters. Thanks for reviewing! |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/11/07
A very nice moment with Hermione. Thank goodness Harry found the nerve to speak up! Such a good couple! |
Author Feedback: No ship but H/Hr! Thanks for reviewing! |
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Lovely piece. I's a really beautifully written one shot. Good work |
Author Feedback: *ducks head in embarrassment* Thanks and thank you for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/11/07
you do realise that "But I don’t think you’re ugly" is six words and that "But I don't think you're ugly, you're gorgeous" is eight words
No seven in sight! Sorry to be so picky  - I love the story! |
Author Feedback: OMG, I did not notice that until you pointed it out. LMAO
Thanks for telling me, changed, and thanks for reviewing! |
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This was sooo what I needed! I love hearing from Hermione's point of view. And the part about going up into her room...
"Later that night, I grinned into my pillow."
That line was absolutely perfect. Loved it! |
Author Feedback: The image of Hermione just grinning to herself over Harry's comment was what made me want to write this in the first place. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing! |
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This is the classic case of waiting way to long to tell someone something important ... like Harry telling Hermione that he loved her. But then, better late than never! Good job with this story! |
Author Feedback: *nods* In the case of H/Hr, it's always better late than never! Thanks for reviewing! |
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Kate34Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
Truly wonderful.Flawless characterizations. You could expalin brakups so we could understan Hernione's feelings better. |
Author Feedback: Hmmm....I could. I'll keep the idea to include background information in mind. Thanks for the concrit! |
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RagavUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
I liked this story so much.It is so close and compatible to canon which I love very much.
Great work by you. |
Author Feedback: Canon, that fickle friend of all Harmonians. Thanks for reviewing! |
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Author Feedback: He's not dead. 
Thanks for reviewing! |
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Lord VaderUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
I'm usually to lazy to write a review,,, but that was really superb!
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Author Feedback: LOL, thanks for taking the time to review! |
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That was nice to say the least. It somehow looks canon at the same time it shouts of all of it's AU-ness!!! Anyway, I liked it and now I am gonna go and check your other stories out. |
Author Feedback: Well, you know, with the whole H/Hr bit. Not exactly canon, is it? Thanks for reviewing! |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
I am up set what JKR did to all of us.
I was looking forword to read About Harry and Hermione to be together.
 but we can sleep on it?,can we? or not?
Plase keep it up with your story's.
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Author Feedback: We can most definitely sleep on it. Nothing wrong with dreaming.
Thanks for reviewing! |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
Now that was a sweet story that still had its poignant moments. It's a very enjoyable one-shot that rings true. I wonder what fianlly brought Harry to enlightenment concerning Hermione? Whatever, it's clearly been worth it for both of them. |
Author Feedback: I was always imagined that after his break-up with Ginny, he started to look at the foundations of his life and realized that Hermione was one of those things that never wavered. Girlfriend followed girlfriend and Harry kept thinking and, bam. There it was. I hope I'm not sounding like JKR. *cringes*
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JanieBSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/11/07
Me again. Just read your bio. You're definitely on track to becoming a better writer and I'm sure you don't need too much encouragement to keep at it! (I get the impression you're positive and dedicated about writing). I haven't read any of your other stories, but this one was well-written and constructed; it flowed very comfortably and there weren't too many grammar/spelling mistakes to rock my obsessive compulsive boat!
Cheers,
JanieB |
Author Feedback: Eeep.
I don't want to sound like a blithering fangirl, but...thank you, thank you, thank you! I really appreciate experienced, and better, writers leaving me concrit.
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