the story is fine and the writing is good.
the story is all in all a good piece of work

i really enjoyed this story!, you have a good grip on how the characters are percieved and react towards each other!

that was soooo oooooooooooo sweet. i can not believe tha tchris almost died that is so sad

is lily going to the pool house with chris or is she going

oh my god. is lily really going to leave and why do james and his cousin look nothing alike that was a good chapter

who is the minister of amgic in their time just wondering and who are the twins?? interesting nad great job

that was my fave chapter so far. really funny with his cousin and sirius

really good i was just wondering where remus and peter were not that i like peter or anything

that was soo funny i nearly died laughing who knew. that was great and i loved it. poor lily

i thought that was a bit slow. james and sirius haven't even shown up yet. but other htan that the baby was really cute

that was really great. his house description was amazing and it is cute that James has a baby brother

that was a great start i really like it and it was great how you put that she was working for mrs. potter

i like this story it seems like something from real life....not just the she hates him he loves her she hits her head and all of a sudden they are together, this is how real people fall for each other

I think you should write the sequeal. Cuz you got me excited and anticipating for it already. I want to know what James did to screw up what Lily and he had. Great Story and I can't wait to read more of your stories. I'm glad that you put the doe and stag partinous in the story. Very creative and the little cousin of James' was a nice touch. Keep Writing.

the story is great so far i can not wait to see what happens in the next chapters.