Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/01/08
Really nice one shot. I loved it, sweet and well written. Good job!  |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much. |
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Wow!!! All I can say is wow!!! That was amazing, it was incredible. Great job!!! |
Author Feedback: Thank you for your compliment. I hope that you check out my other work as well. |
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hp-n-hgSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/11/07
i like it it is really well written i havent read any of your other stuff here but i hope to in the future i believe that you're a good author if you have any advice i would love to here it i would really appreciate it if you could read some of my work |
Author Feedback: Thank you for the compliment. I hope that you enjoy my other work equally as well.
By read some of your work, are you asking me to beta? |
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dexter19Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/11/07
very much better than the crapilogue of DH...nice and cute fic...  |
Author Feedback: I think my 3-year-old could write better than the crapilogue. 
Thanks. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/11/07
Quite the delightful read, you have there. I found it lighthearted, yet quite touching. The last paragraph, especially, rings quite true in all its ramifications and possibilities. I do have to wonder who'll react more strongly to this step, Ron or Ginny; given what's said here, I'd reckon Ginny. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much.
As for who would react more...not sure, probably Molly. |
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bgegeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
“I was trying to kiss you? Is that ok?"
Cute.. not very smooth or very bright but cute. |
Author Feedback: Well, that's Harry for you. |
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Nice, very nice. It's good to see that you have this up here.  |
Author Feedback: Thanks, I had been wondering what you thought of this one.
Now to finish the--four other pieces in the works... |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
Nice and sweet one shot, really! Great job! Care to write a sequel? |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
Nope, no sequel. I am horribly slow about even the planned ones. |
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awwwi loved it, well done girl, that was so sweet and wonderful, keep up |
Author Feedback: Thanks! |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
Awwww... very sweet. I'm glad that she realized what was in front of her and that he cared enough to grab the bull by the horns. Great job. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. It was fun to write the realization. |
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that was sweet and something that could've happened - realistic, I guess. cool. |
Author Feedback: Thanks. I was shooting for realism. |
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Aw, goregous story. I realy like it. It's a very cute one shot perfect for a little uplifting ;D
Write well, write often. |
Author Feedback: Thank you.
I've got a few more things in the works. |
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harrietteUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
i love the last part:
"The Weasleys will resent us. The press will have a field day. But none of that really matters. The only thing that matters is that I will be by his side, and he by mine, for the rest of our lives."
true and i know hermione would really say it if they would have been together in the last book.
keep it up!
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Author Feedback: Thanks, I did particularly like that line. |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
Nice little story. Harry and Hermione are so right for each other. Good for HARRY finally taking that first step! |
Author Feedback: Thank you. Yes, he is a Gryffindor after all. |
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hagridSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
Truly, the only thing that matters is that the two of them are together. It matters not that JK named anyone Albus Severus, or even Hugo. It matters not that after the series was complete she dropped that bomb concerning Dumbledore. All that matters is that 'Arry and 'Ermione are together. |
Author Feedback: Absolutely the truth. Regardless of what she planned to do, those two have the best relationship in the text. |
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