Fire_Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/03/08
Why am I reading so much angst now LOL! But even though it ripped my heart out so badly I loved it and made me  so sad yet so unbelievably touching. I loved it! The death scene was captured flawlessly and writing about that now gives me the shivers! It is soooooooo sad but strangely heartfelt and extremely touching but gut-wrenching sad. You captured the emotions amazingly and the essence of the stor...wow amazing story truly! The memories were done perfectly and got their meaning across extremely well especially that beautiful last one that broke my heart but made me love them so much! You wrote an amazing story I can't believe it's your first story it is absilutely FANTASTICO!!
xoxo
Hana |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/01/08
That was so sad!!!! It was beuatiful but sad! It was wonderful!  |
Author Feedback: Why thank you, I' glad that you liked it. |
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omg. thAt was sad! i think i actually cried!  and i dont usually cry on FF. wow. i loved it keep up the awsome work! |
Author Feedback: Heh, it seems that I have made a lot of people cry with this fanfic.
Thanks for reading! |
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You should have a warning about character death in the intro, some people really hate that sort of story and would rather not read them. |
Author Feedback: No problem. Thanks for the tip. |
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MissLexiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
It was so sad!! They were so happy together and the baby.... that's horrible! (the situation, not the writing...) Very sad, but interesting writing. Great first try.  |
Author Feedback: Hehe, well thank you for reading. I hope you continue to do so. |
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SomebodyUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
awesome story  i love it ^^ i hope to read more from u
btw ur name it is the name of a band i know in myspace ^^ |
Author Feedback: Really? Hmm, I must look them up then. Well, anyway, thanks for the compliment on my writing, and yes I will continue writing so you can read more of my stories. |
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The first fanfiction you write you decide to make everyone cried their eyeballs after reading it, what is wrong with you? Okay, flame aside, brilliant, very poignant, very angst, very mind blowing writing. But like another viewer said, please write another story but with a much happier ending. DH traumatized me enough. |
Author Feedback: I know, I know. I guess I was feeling sad when I wrote it...or maybe I just felt like a good angst and drama story. Who knows. I will write a happy story, I promise...because I know how it feels to read DH. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
That was a good story. You should continue to write more. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I shall. |
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mugglemomSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
How terribly sad!! So heart-wrenching. That packed a hell of a punch. I need some chocolate. Technically, it was written very well. I enjoyed the ebb and flow of the story and plotline. nicely done tearjerker! |
Author Feedback: I'm glad you felt something for the story. It was an intended set. You go get that chocolate. I hope you feel better. |
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CateagleSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/11/07
The flashbacks definitely framed and told the story well, and a sad and poignant, yet in some ways triumphant, story it is. It's sad for what he's lost and how it happaned, but it's triumphant in that -nothing- will separate Harry & Hermione. |
Author Feedback: I agree with you. I believe their relationship is one of those 'Never Die' relationships that will always prevail, but that's just what I think.
Thanks for the feedback. |
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atiqahSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/07
Oh wow, I did not expect that at all. The built up was really good, I love how you laid out the flashbacks and the resolution really got me. Very poignant.
This is what Harry and Hermione is. |
Author Feedback: That's what I thought too, Harry and Hermione have a variety of different emotions going through their relationship, and I decided to bring out the one that was most frequent in JKR's Books, sorrow, drama and angst. It seemed to work out for the best.
Thanks for the review. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/07
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Author Feedback: I'm sorry you cried, but I'm also glad that you felt something for the character and the trouble he was in. Like I said to someone else before, I wanted my first story to stick in people's minds. And I'll remember that just for you, I'll make a story that ends happily.
THanks for reviewing. |
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that was very, very sad. So he was in a mental institution? Locked up for his own safety? I guess that was a bit confusing. but I thought you wrote well. |
Author Feedback: Yes, Harry is in a mental instituion in the muggle world. It wasn't so much for his own safety as to keep him and his crazed self off of the streets and not blow something (or himself) up. Thanks for the compliment and the review. |
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RagavUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 03/11/07
It is a very nice story albeit a bit tragic.Nice fic for a first story. |
Author Feedback: I like bringing out Harry's emotions, and the best way to do that, is to add angst and drama, and a couple of dying people.
Heh, I just wanted my first story to connect with people. Thanks for the review. |
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OH WOW! THIS WAS BEYOND BRILLIANT. I CRIED, I SWEAR! STILL CRYING...DAMN I'M SO EMOTIONAL. YOU DON'T DESERVE ANY FLAMES FOR THIS, IT WAS BRILLIANTLY WRITTEN, EVEN THOUGH ROHAN AND HERMIONE DIED...WHY THE NAME ROHAN BTW? JUST ASKING, SOUNDS UNIQUE, I'VE NEVER HEARD IT BEFORE. |
Author Feedback: I use the name Rohan a lot becuase I'm part Irish and the name originates from Ireland, the real meaning of the name means red, red-haired or ascending so it had nothing to do with the child itself. I just think it's a cool name.
Thanks for the review. |
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