I became interested in H/Hr fics after having read DH twice without much satisfaction, then reading the series over again looking for answers to things that didn't really add up for me. You've done a great job highlighting those inconsistencies.

I like this story. It would be cool if it were all real, but thats the thing if it were real we wouldn't know about it would we....


PapaMidnite

It's well written but a bit short.
You could add some more details as to what happened for real such as what did the broomstick, uh, Ginny end up doing? The same question just with who, when and how often.
What do the Weasleys have to say about it?
Has the DADA curse finally been broken? Hermione would know that and Murray would most likely want to know.
And there's loads of other unanswered questions. Which I can understand as even the original has many unanswered questions.

This is the most mature and realistic Harry and Hermione that you've ever written, not that realism and maturity in teenagers is necessary for good fiction.

Nice work.

You might not consider it one of the best stories you've ever written, but I enjoyed it immensely none-the-less. Your arguments were very good, and I much preferred your alternate version of events to DH. I also liked how Hermione had planted the idea of the story, and how she'd passed on the notes to keep it accurate. And the part about Dumbledore being gay was much better than the real thing, sad though that is.

i like it it is very well written i hope to read more fo your work on here well i hope you enjoyed my review love this story
a fan
hp-n-hg

I really liked this story. It was very refreshing. The only parts that I didn't cling to as much were the parts about Ron becoming a 5th wheel, although I could see that happening - i guess i just want the trio to be perfect once more - and I also wish that Luna was still included as their friend. But, that's it - otherwise - lovely work!

Ah I like your plot bunny. After DH, you can't help but wonder what JKR would do if her own characters had issues with the book.

Not half bad! A clever and entertaining idea - I especially love the idea that it's all real!
Cheers!
JanieB

Contrary to your own opinion, a pretty little piece that once again put things as they should have been. Ginny the broomstick is a nice touch, as is the thing about gay Dumbledore. At least Jo has used THAT in the meantime...

Lots of fun, and I totally agree with "Jane Puckle'"s observations. While I liked parts of DH a lot, the way Harry & Hermione were portrayed made so little sense!

It was a very cute story. i saw this one at random and decided to read it before i went to work...very sweet...sad about ron, loved how you changed which weasley died....Awesome job!

A delightful little hoot!! (sorry Hedwig) This an adorable story, I wish it had happened.

This was a fun one shot. I like the way Hermione is so straight forward. Thanks for this little gem.

hehehehe i loved tit Jane Puckle ? awesome hermione's 2nd name and her close-to-be surname, well done i loved it!