Oh, that was sweet! Your writing's almost poetic. I can picture H/H exactly as you described them here.

I also love how Hermione observed how the boys show affection. I esp love how she describes Harry in various situations. That shows how much attention she gives him.

A very beautiful fic - I love the stories that focus on a more platonic romance (if that makes any sense) rather than just hormones. Good job!

I thought this was so incredibly sweet! I wish you'd write more along this line-the description of them sleeping together is such a wonderful image

This has got to be one of my the best one-shots out here thus far. Good GAWD. It's so poetic. I love it.

I love this. It's a great little mood piece. Hermione's thoughts are written beautifully and their conversation when Harry wakes up is very cool.

I've read this before and I'm pretty sure I reviewed but oh god, that was so perfect. Thank you. x

What a sweet story...love Hermione analyzing everything...would love to hear the inevitable conversation they will have...or maybe it's better not to.

A lovely and simple addition to the fanfiction universe. I loved the conversation between the pair.

Thanks for writing!

Jae

This is so cute!! This paragraph

They never really arranged for them to sleep together every night. Now didn't that sound amusing? Sleep together. They were sleeping together. It's not often that people would use that term in its literal meaning, and that's all it really was. They were just sharing a bed, sharing some space, lying there wrapped under the covers, their bodies giving off heat and warmth and all those other nice things that two warm bodies pressed against each other could give.

makes me SOOOOOOOOOOOO happy! I always think like that too, and then when I say anything, I sound silly... keep it up!

owwwwwwwww
how fluffy... and even if thers no end... its still so sweet... and i dont fell like it really needs anything more!

this is a great story. its so romantic. probably the best ive read so far. i also loved a letter to my love. please update soon.

this is the sweetest, most tender, most beautiful on shot i have ever read. thanks so much for this.

That was amazing!...i loved the way you described the closeness and the characterization of Hermione was very good!.

I would love to read a sequel to this story about what would happen next, your take on how they would start a relationship is something i am curious about, would you write it with alot of fluff or like this one: where the reader feels present and aware, detailed so to imagine it all, the scent of her (or him for the female readers hehe )and the surroundings, the thoughts of a woman in war with her own feelings almost.

Suffice to say i loved it and hope to read more.

Very good job!!

This is the kind of fic that we need these days.

I loved it.

Aw this was such a cute one shot, I liked it a lot... You didn't specify their age or anything, and that's great, you leave it to our imaginations... nice story, I enjoyed reading it a lot