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Lies for Love

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Tigerlily
Unsigned | Chapter : 13 | Date : 30/06/08
Such a great story! I love it! I read it almost without breaks!^^
 

aditivats
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 21/06/08
I have just started reading this story and i m simply loving it. Thumbs up for u
 

Joy
Unsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 07/06/08
Teddy's hair changes often, like his mother. Why and how aren't they noticing this?
Author Feedback: that's when they're first born. tonks changes her hair by will. since teddy is a child, it is my belief, and the idea in this story, that he'll change his features according to extreme mood (sort of like spurts of accidental magic).

so, sit on that and chew it for a while- then come back with your problems
 

hpfan2009
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 25/04/08
I loved this story I can't wait to read the sequel.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 4 | Date : 31/03/08
...hello?^^
woah, really, your story is great and very interesting

so, other reviewer call you a girl??....i feel sorry for you....i'm a girl and some people called me a boy in a chat, i know how you feel about this xD
anyway, i like your story a lot and i go back to reading the next chapters^^ (yearh, slap me, bad english xD i know ...)

uhm, 'bout the story, i think you know how it feels when you
fancy a girl that your best friend likes/loves too...i know it could be wrong, and if its wrong....ignore me i don't want to make you angry ....

and, by the way, i know exactly how harry feels...i really do...

enough from me...(argh, i hate my english...)
don't get angry about your reviewer...^^
(especially not about me xD)
...well, bye then
 

Mionefan
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 27/03/08
Oh yes, well put. I can only suppose the pain of childbirth. NOT pleasant.
You need to watch a bit of your spelling. Mostly you have it right but "there" and "their" get mixed a bit among other things. Not something a spell checker would pick up, but a grammar checker might.
 

Mionefan
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 27/03/08
Well, a little error crept in... Harry's flat either has 3 bedrooms and 2 baths or 4 bedrooms.
 

Mionefan
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/03/08
OK, so far so good. You've paid attention to detail and spelling. Good start. JKR should have paid attention to her own canon and not gone off on a ridiculous tangent with Harry and Ginny. All the rest of her books lead to Harry and Hermione being together.
 

wonderjoe
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 12/03/08
this has been a good story. i'm looking forward to reading the next story!
 

wonderjoe
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 12/03/08
this has been a good story. i'm looking forward to reading the next story!
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 13 | Date : 03/03/08
Oh wow really love this series guess I have to start another on now. Can't wait to see what all happens here.
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 03/03/08
Oh wow the place in Boston sounds fantastic really enjoying this wish Teddy was here with them though
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 03/03/08
OH my goodness Teddy was adopted out !!!!! ACk of my goodness Can't definitely picture what you explained. WOw
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 03/03/08
Oh wow so they mentioned maybe going to the US cool Can't wait to see where they end up in all this going to the next chapter
 

Anne_pendragon
Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 03/03/08
Love the little talk that Harry had with the baby that was precious. Can't wait to see what happens next well off to the next chapter
 

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