great job!this story is really good! i cant wait to read the rest of your stories!keep up the excellent work on them! |
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Author Feedback: 'Awesome' works.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/02/08
Hey... Just wondering, is Abnomaly intentionally a messed up word? It sound like you mixed together 'anomaly' and 'abnormality'... |
Author Feedback: "Abnomaly" is intentionally spelled that way. Its a combination of 'anomaly' and 'ab-whatever's.  |
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Leon21Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 03/02/08
Great story! Really liked it, made me even more interested in the Transformers then I was before! |
Author Feedback: Glad to know.  |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 30 | Date : 29/01/08
Great ending, this story has been really awesome! I absolutely loved it! |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for reading.  |
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omg this story was great!i cant wait to read the rest of your stories!keep up the great work! |
Author Feedback: Thank you so very much for reading. |
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That was great love the quote from the movie at the end.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
Author Feedback: Movie? Try quote from Transformers Franchise period.  |
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What a great story, you had the happy ending, without the ridiculous bit of everybody making it through unscathed. Most importantly you wrapped everything up, while leaving room for a sequel if you ever felt like it, great job, thank you. |
Author Feedback: Its war. Not everyone's going to survive. But, it deserves a happy ending.  |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 28/01/08
Well, I am sorry to see this story end. Hopefully you'll be struck by the plot bunny soon and start another story.
Aly |
Author Feedback: We can only hope. |
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CibblerUnsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 28/01/08
It was really great to read this Harry Potter / Transformers X-over. (it was particurlaly nice to see Bumblebee again) |
Author Feedback: It sure was. Bumblebee was completely missing from TF from the mid 90s til the early 2000s because Hasbro lost the trademark until recently. Its great to see him back. |
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BenRGUnsigned | Chapter : 30 | Date : 28/01/08
A nice ending that puts the seal on the story. It was an interesting idea on Harry's part to turn the Order into a kind of 'guardians of the gates', always hiding in the background.
Overall, you have managed to get all the characters written as they should be. Apart from a confusing battle scene at the climax, this story was a great read from beginning to end. I will be looking out for any future works from you. |
Author Feedback: Thank you very much for constantly reading and reviewing. Your views were a great help to the writing of this fic.  |
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Good story really enjoyed it I look 4 ward to any other future storys that u decided 2 do
H/HR Shippers 4 ever |
Author Feedback: H/Hr shippers forever! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 29 | Date : 25/01/08
Ok, I'll be honest about this chap. It was very well written, but it reminded me too much of the "King's Cross" chapter of DH. And since I didn't like Harry "dying" and then being live again back then, I don't like it here too. Sorry! |
Author Feedback: Well... considering the fact that I deliberately paralleled that chapter (as well as Prime's constant deaths and returns to life) it all falls to personal preferance.  |
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I like it I have said it efore you have used every thing from the frist cartoon to the live action it seems and that was great.Thank you for this story and the time and effort that you have put in to it.Please ignore any and all flames.Enjoy your self when you write and have fun in your life when you can. |
Author Feedback: It's what it all boils down to.  Thank you for reading. |
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BenRGUnsigned | Chapter : 29 | Date : 24/01/08
I could accuse you of using a 'deus ex machinia' in this chapter. However, the intervention of a near-god is the /point/, isn't it?
So! Megatron survives. However, he has lost a lot of his best troops for no real gain. Of course, the Autobots have suffered heavily too. However, they have made friends and, perhaps, that is a victory of sorts that no number of dead heroes can take away.
An interesting ending, one both unexpected and yet in harmony with the overall 'feel' of the Transformer and Harry Potter universes.
Well, I'll be waiting for the epilogue. After all, there is a lot to be cleared up. The world has been knocked in a loop again, and I strongly suspect that Harry will no longer be able to avoid a central role in the rebuilding. |
Author Feedback: I do admit I probably cheated by getting Primus involved. That said, it was my full intention from the very start of this fic that Harry would save the day by opening the Matrix.
Having Megatron survive was another one of my intentions from the start. The idea was though the involvement of the wizards may come to a close, the war itself will go on.
I really wanted an ending that fit with both continuities. I'm glad to hear the you think I've been able to do that. Hopefully, I'll remember to tie everything up in the epilogue. |
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