Frankly, I'm on Heizel's side after the latest chapter of this story. Forget the ministry, they need to be taken down HARD and I hope that Harry and Hermione DO join Heinzl and take down Amelia Bones HARD, along with all the rest of the pureblood bigots.

Before I continue reading I had to say something.

I very very much enjoyed "broomstick" but your writing style seems to have changed and I am finding it rather hard to follow this story. I want to finish the story arc now but I find my self feeling ho-hum.

I am guessing you did not co-author broomstick? I cannot pinpoint what it is about the writing style that is bugging me except that it is disjointed.

I will continue reading this story, but I hope it get cleaned up as we go along.

MMh, things are getting a bit out of hand here...the Purebloods are doing nothing to put Heinzl in a bad light, their decrees only give Heinzl and his barbaric methods a reason to exist...

Well, the Ministry is really trying to start a civil war with the muggleborns. As for the Hogwarts situation, I think they should meet whoever is going to do the memory modification, stun them, snap their wands, modify their memories, and dump them naked in the middle of a muggle shopping center. Fair is fair, and do onto others as you would want to have others do onto you.

Seems that Harry and Hermione might have to join forces with Heinzl afterall. Perhaps they can come to an understanding? As it stands, both Heinzl and the Ministry are equally bad.

you are right and in saying " this means war!"
I can't beleve how the death Eaters colud do shuch thing.
Poor Muggle-borns.
What about the baby?
this getting worst.
i love how the story is going.
please continue all of your story's.
Like ( the time-Meddlers) and ( Harry McGonagall) and this story too.
( Harry Potter and The Muggle-born Uprising).
But till then have a real good week and weekend.
tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all Folks!
Looney Waner Mouse" Good night and good luck!"

I have really enjoyed this so far and I look forward to reading more.

Interesting beginning a dark lord out for the purebloods instead of the other way around.

I love how your stoty is going so far.
I am all so looking forword to the next chater soon as well your ather story's too like
( The Time-Meddlers) and ( Harry McGonagall) and this wonderful,excellent Story called
( Harry Potter and The Muggle-born Uprising)
But till then have a good week.
Tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that;s all folks!
Looney Warner Mouse " Good aftyer Noon and Good night and Good Luxk!" So long.

This story is totally intense! There is so much fighting and killing going on - Pureblood vs. Muggle-born war - OMG! I hope that you are still working on this story! It is getting really good. The character of Heinzl is just scary because he is evil, but in the name of good...for the Muggle-borns anyway. I hope that you will update this soon!

Excellent chapter. I have loved your stories so far and will continue to read them. I'll jump over to the next chapter and continue reading.

omg omg omg omg, not fair not fair thats oooooohhh stupid henzil. Wow he is going to do more damange then voldie! KEEP WRITING CANT WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, you weren't kidding about the conflict beginning. Lets hope the Minister's comment about snapping the muggle-born's wands, binding their power and modifying their memories doesn't become public knowledge. Then again, a targeted law or decree like she is proposing, especially one that specifically mentions retaliation for self defense is asking for trouble and escalation. That paints a target on the person prohibited from self defense as bullies LIKE going after targets that can't fight back.

Yikes!
the Wizarding World is in truble.
this bad this veary bad.
I wloud like to read more so I can get over my shock Poor Hermione,Poor Harry,Poor Ginny,Poor Neville.
this a excindting chapter.
I hope that you will contine thisd story as well your others like.
( The time Meddlers) and ( Harry McGonagall) as well this wonderful & excellent story called ( Harry Potterand the Muggle-born Uprising) too
But till then so long.
tha tha tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all " both " Wizard and Muggle folks!
Looney Warner Mouse " Good after noon and Good night and Good luck!"
Input soundtrack cartoon.

Fade out to black.
END trmisson.

far to short, it was but a snack i can't wait for more

Wow, the plot thickens. I can't wait to see how this turns out. Very well done, your stories are some of my favorites on Portkey. Keep up the great work.