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jorgieporgie116
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 15/10/07
This is soo adorable!! Please update soon! Colby seems like such an adorable child. I want to know more about his background and I see a little foreshadowing as to why he doesn't response to touch....UPDATE SOON!!!
Author Feedback: Will do! Thanks for reading and reviewing. It makes this all worth it!
 

oneiros lykos
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 15/10/07
The last chapter was interesting in how harsh Harry was to Hermione, especially if they are dating as this chapter implies. It sounds in character that he would be so stubborn, but I'm not sure if Hermione would have given in so easily about the whole situation. Does Colby know anything about magik? Wasn't his mom magikal, too?
Author Feedback: I think it has a lot to do with knowing about choosing your battles wisely. Right now, we know little about Colby's background except that Sirius was his father and Celeste was his mother. He knows his mother is/was a witch (and her own parents despised that about her)... the kid tells Harry about it in Chapter 2 or 3. I think Harry's harshness is more in response to feeling like he has little control over the events in his life. I don't think he was meaning to be unkind.
 

nakedquidditchfan
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/07
Haha. "The talk" One more thing that separates wizards from muggles. I like the idea of this story, and how it has played out so far. You don't see too many "Siruis leaves Harry with a child" fics. Even the "some Dursley leaves Harry with a child" is more popular. Great start!
Author Feedback: Hey, thanks. I figured that wizards have their own "Talks" that have to take place above and beyond what mere muggle talks address.

Thanks for the review.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/07
Hmm, and now we know that Sirius' son is definitely magical and Harry discovers one of the "joys" of parenting, how children can manage to make intimate moments that much less common among adults. In addition to the "talk" about magic, I do think Harry needs to have a long talk with Colby about the treatment he got from his grandparents since Harry's early life give him the experience to relate to. It should be interesting to see how Colby grows in a supportive and loving environment (though it sounds like Harry has quite come to understand all that involves).
Author Feedback: As a parent, I have had intimate moments interupted by the shreiks of a child, so it seemed to fit here. I know Harry and Colby will have a long talk about past and future, but I am not sure that it is going to be as soon as it probably should happen.

Thanks for the review!
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/07
Very cute Harry/Hermione scene! Yes, Harry, you did turn out alright. I'm looking forward to seeing how the talk about magic goes.
Author Feedback: Yes... me too! Thanks for the review.
 

pstibbons
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/07
It seems odd . You sure about Hermione\'s character here ?
Author Feedback: To be honest, no. She is a very difficult person to figure out.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/10/07
Aw, I knew Harry would want to keep Colby. Yaay for Ron knowing & at least trying to be alright with Hermione's feelings for Harry.
Author Feedback: I don't think Ron has much say in the matter. The heart wants what the heart wants, and he could be a jerk about it or Ron can embrace the couple. I think he made the right choice.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/10/07
Aw, Poor Colby! Thank goodness Harry is such a good person. I'm sure he's going to do great with him.
Author Feedback: Harry is a great guy. I think he will be fine.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 14/10/07
Nice job with writing the trio. They're so in character! Oooh, That has to be Sirius' son. Excellent chapter!
Author Feedback: I thought they were too, but another reviewer says Hermione feels... odd? Oh well. It always works itself out in the end.
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 14/10/07
Interesting beginning! I feel bad for Celeste. She loved Sirius, and never got a chance to be with him out in the open. I'm very curious as to where this story is going.
Author Feedback: Me too.

Thanks for the review.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/10/07
Hmm, I can't blame Harry for his decision. I'm really surprised that he didn't use the arguement that Colby was the responsibility of House Black and, as head of family, -his- responsibility, other reason notwithstanding. I do have to wonder about Hermione's attitude toward this, since it sounds her interests have swung toward Harry rather than Ron (not that I can really blame her, though - admittedly, -this- Ron doesn't seem as much a prat). I am surprised that she didn't insist on an early visit to Gringott's tomorrow for a Heritage Ritual, to make sure Colby was Sirius' child.
Author Feedback: What they do, I have no idea. I don't think Harry has any doubts that the child is Sirius. I think the kid looks enough like Sirius to be of no doubt. I am not clear (nor as readers, should we be) as to what is going on in Hermione's head about this all.
 

Kandy123
Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 14/10/07
well that was a little strange even for them! so they are together in a way.mm interesting wonder how the talks going to go?update soon
Author Feedback: Will do, and thanks for the review.
 

Kandy123
Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 14/10/07
well thats a surprise that shes so against this. and are they already together?update soon
Author Feedback: I think that they aren't really 'together' as much as they are trying to figure out how much they really want to be 'together'... I could be wrong though.

As for being against it, I could understand that. If he has a kid, and she ends up with him, then they both are parents. They are only 22... after all...
 

oneiros lykos
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/10/07
Aww, poor Harry being forced into fatherhood overnight - most men get 9 months to transition! Good chapter!
Author Feedback: Very true, but sometimes even nine months doesn't prepare a man for fatherhood.
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 14/10/07
Hmm, well, I reckon I saw that coming and it makes sense that her impending death forced her to reach out to Harry. Harry being who/what he is, won't be able to resist taking this boy in, esp. since the child's early experiences resonate so strongly with what Harry went through at the Dursley's. What will be "educational" is to watch the reactions of Harry's friends and of the wizarding world at large to this situation. It will certainly help show Harry his -real- friends.

Excellent story so far. I do hope Harry manages to work through that emotionless mask Colby seems to wear, it seem way too familiar to him. Perhaps a bit of sharing about his early years might help build bridges there.
Author Feedback: Thank you for the review, and I hope that Harry is able to break through to the child. There are some hilarious (at least to me) things to come, and some struggle (naturally).

 

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