Beautiful and different, yet so very, very sad! I cried

EEK!!! it kinda reminds me of the song 'Don't take the girl' from Tim McGraw.... its good! listen to it!!
And listen to the lyrics... you'll see!!!
well, i gotta go...im too hyper, and i don't wanna cause myself any damage cuz im sooo hyper!!! good job though... i like the idea of making it a letter...!!!
BYE

it was absolutely amazing it made me cry...it hope it grows on you more cause it was just so friggin good

I've read several stories this weekend, some of them long and some of them short, all of them have touched me in a small way, feeling content when reading them, this one did not....but touched me like a knife through my chest.

Extremely well written!!

*sniff sniff* that was so sad and sweet, and yet so beautiful. very lovely work.

'Tis a happy, sad, and quite poignant installment, here. Ultimately, though, it shows both Harry's love for Hermione and his love, and dedication, for their daughter. It would be most interesting to see this from other's points of view.

It was good, but incredibly sad. Thank you for posting, and keep up the good work. (I just hope it's happier next time. )

It was certainly different. Not sure if I'm too crazy about it; while the stategy works (and please don't get upset, I have no bad intention whatsoever, I'm just picky), I felt a bit of a lacking in the language domination: lacking words, connector verbs, lacking a bit of variety in the language to say it in some way.

Anyway, I am glad you risk trying different story-telling strategies.

Cheers!

Rosali

It was definitely sad. It bothered me a little that it was in more of a poem form but had no rhyme or rhythm. It was very good though, despite the sadness. I liked the bits about the rain.

Oh wow. i thought it was a happy story, then.. i started crying............ but i guess.. it was.. in a way..

Beautiful story. Keep up the good work. Hope to read more like it.

That was very cute! I like how it's in poem form, it made it more interesting to read. Very creative, great job!

I do like it. My name is Amy too! A bit of different style. It brought tears to my eyes.

This is story is very beautiful, it had touched my hearth, but it is very sad, it would have been wonderful with an happy end too... I love you style of writing thi story is special, sorry if I can't write too well my feelings, but I'm italian and usually I don't write in english, i only read.
Elisa Cazzola

that 1 wz so touching. there were so less words but they made so much of meaning. o..... y do characters die in the end. i mean, i know that they hav 2, 1 day, but y mention of it?! it makes it sad. neway it wz still gr8 n made a nice read...