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I love the battle, it was really well written. But Ginny and Harry seemed to be acting a bit OOC. And I also was kinda confused about when suddenly Ron was dead instead of Ginny...what happened? And also, Harry knew no more? Did she kill him? |
Author Feedback: Wow, someone's actually reviewing? I haven't even thought of this story.
Well, I can't reveal much but just look up the word Phantasmagoria...that's supposed to be key. And no, Ginny didn't kill him.
I'm not sure when I will update; especially since Learning to Be started. Anyways, thanks for reading!
Viopathartic
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lol I love phantasmagoria. Yeah this chapter revealed a little bit of the plot but it's still confusing as hell... is this going to be a big neurological disorder!Harry fic with hallucinations left and right (that would be hilarious yet pointless  ) or is there something else? Dunno if you've given up on this? |
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Old ChuckUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/12/07
I am befuddled. Is it over? Have you drawn any conclusion? Am I the only one who hasn't the foggiest notion where you are going? I didn't like 'The Lady or the Tiger' when I first read it and it got worse when I read it again. I need closure — or at least another chapter... Help!
Save me! Old Chuck
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alruneSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 30/10/07
hmm interesting... interesting... there's all kinds of goodies going on in this story... can't wait to find out what's really going on... as long as its not hermione who's really dead (or harry of course), i think i'll be okay. awesome job on the chapter, please update soon! -aj- |
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hannanSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 28/10/07
It is weird but I really like it post more ASAP |
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BelameeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/10/07
very good keep up the good work . I just got back . I have been gone for quite a while . I love this story very much thank you |
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i'm a bitconfused myself, but i think i know what you want to do. for a moment, i thought you were going to write different scenarios on how ginny's, ron's, or Hermione's death would affect Harry. but now, what the hell did ginny do to him? i must know now. |
Author Feedback: scratch your last two sentences and I will say you are very close.
Have you ever had a dream that seemed so real that you don't know you're dreaming?
Think about it. |
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JakBlackSigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/10/07
Seriously I want more. This is like wtf is going on. Yet it isn't a bad way it is a good way. What happened oh man I blame you for having me wonder. You should also feel special because I rarely post comments to people because I am lazy but because I liked this last chapter so much I decided to break from my usual routine. I can't wait to read more. |
Author Feedback: I bet people think I'm crazy now. This whole story is very weird because you won't know what's happening until the end I think. But I'll give you a hint.
In the first chapter, Ron was at the hospital, Hermione was at the tree and Ginny was dead.
Second chapter: Hermione was at the hospital, Ginny was at the tree, and Ron was dead.
Third chapter: I think you can guess.
So...I think it's safe to say that he's in a sequence of dreams...phantasmagoria. I love that word too
I feel very honored that you broke you're habit to review for me. I DO feel extremely special and all warm and fuzzy inside
Le |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/10/07
I hope you are able to update soon. I want to see how everyhting is going to play out. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/10/07
this is really really good finish it pu-leese!! I will sit at my computer waitng for the next chapter. HURRY UP PLEASE!! |
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that's sad that ginny died, but i don't really like ginny at all.... did hermione know about the potion?
hope you update soon |
Author Feedback: nope Hermione didn't know about the love potion.
thanks for reviewing. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 07/10/07
I can't wait for the next update. This chapter was awsome. I love all of your stories! Update soon! |
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its good keep it going hopefully the ak missed or killed someone no one really likes |
Author Feedback: read Chapter2  |
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MikeSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/07
Oh no! You can't just stop there! Harry has too much to live for now. Maybe he and hermione didn't actually say it, but the kiss on the hand said it all. (The was a really nice scene, btw) Please update! |
Author Feedback: Thank you, yes the kiss on the hand was all me. It just seemed like something he would do
Read Chapter 2!
Viopathartic |
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SkyraiderSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 06/10/07
Very nice story, although it would have been nice to see a little more how Harry grew confident in this year at Hogwarts. In DH he just expects to die and is therefore not really a cheering bloke. His confidence in winning (in your story) contradicts in my opinion a little his neglect of Ginny. Some explanation - especially regarding the last sentence (nice cliffhanger) - would have been nice. Like that he somehow felt that Ginny would not be his real love. So what now? H/Hr dead? Story ends. One could be badly hurt - long recuperation - love. If all survive nicely, Ginny could try to get to Harry and pull some nasty stunts to get Hermione out of the way - however she will be at school, and H/Hr will live together. Maybe there are so many girls in auror classes that chase Harry or Hermione wants to leave the UK and Harry would have to chase her (literally). Well, I hope you go on to see what you have in mind! |
Author Feedback: I'm not gonna do anything involving after hogwarts...everything will take place directly during the aftermath of the Final Battle. The one where Hermione leaves is somewhat cliche in my opinion. I've read too much about that and I just want to be orginal in my stories.
Read chapter 2 to get an idea of what's coming.
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