Finally I get a chance to continue reading your story; I've been terribly busy the past weeks.

Just a curiosity, was that last paragraph really significant? Becuase if not, it was rather useless (no offence intended, please) and could offend some non-catholics (not me, fyi, lol).

Cheers!

Rosali

Since you asked for some contructive criticism, here it goes: I think you could have developed this story more. The idea, the plotline, are fine, but everything seems to happen a litte too fast, Luna and Rolf's arguments are too light, and both come to realize they want to be together too soon. There's no denial, not all those steps you take to realize you want to be with someone. I can see Luna skipping it all -- but surely not Ron.

Oh, and you had a little problem with the kids, too. You write Hugo and Lily as if they were children, but if they the story sets itself seven years after the epilogue they'd be 16 (how often do you see 16 year old's sleeping upon a table? It's more likely their over-forty parents would feel sleepy before they would) and would still be in Hogwarts.

And James, Albus and Rose would be adults according to the Wizarding Law, and allowed to apparate by theirselves. (James would be around 19/20 years old, and Albus and Rose at least 17, probably already turning 18).

Those are just details, but one gotta to pay attention to it, right?

Wow..that was a really short epilogue. Very cute. I thought the story was nicely done. Great job at it.

This was cute. I'm glad that Ron and Luna came together finally. I'm glad that it wasn't too fast, like they didn't just have a huge make-out session. I mean, it would've been too quick because she'd be all vunerable. Lovely job at the pacing.

That was a little interesting. It was alright for a fight scene. I guess it could've been more involved. It seemed a little quick for Rolf to leave just because Ron broke his nose. I would think Rolf would put up more of a fight. Nice job at this chapter.

That's very intersting. It's rare that you see stories intertwiened with religon. Very nice. I liked it. Lovely job at this.

Well, it seems like Luna hasn't changed at all. How old are the children in this story. They seem to be quite young. Maybe James not too old. Very lovely job.

This is very interesting. I'm quite surprised that it's not really akward between Harry and Ron. I'm glad that they seemed to figure out that H/G were perfect together. I'm quite interested that it's Neville and Ginny. I'm a Neveille/Ginny and D/G shipper. It's cool with me.

This was a nice, short chapter. Wonderful job. I am off to read the next one.

That was a wonderful chapter. Great job at that. I am not surprised that Luna is still crazy.

Well this is going to be quite interesting. So sad that the children were affected by the divorce. I'm going to keep readint his.

awwww very beautiful, I loved your story, every chapter, it is wonderful, you made me smile today. Thanks!!

oh very very nice, I love Ron with Luna, and there are so few stories about them, thanks for a happy read

wow I wasn't expecting an epilogue. that was a surprise. Great story though. thanks bye

Aw I love your version of luna! I also love the name of Harry and Hermione\'s daughter Athena (REALLY pretty name in my opinion). I hope one day JK goes \"Oh crap!\" and re-writes DH like this (I\'d buy it way quicker than DH).