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kimmypotter
Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 06/11/07
awe this story is so cute. this story is one of my favorites.
Author Feedback: Awe, thanks! I hope that you will continue to read and review my stuff!
 

GinnyattheLyric
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 06/11/07
Very cute! It was an intresting twist on the Hermione/Ron turns into Harry/Hermione theme. I liked the Draco/Hermione affair with the whole Draco is a wearwolf thing thrown in. THanks again and keep writing!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the reveiw, and I wasn't sure how people were going to react to the unlikely affair between a known Mudblood hater and a muggle born witch, but I had to put it in there to show a)Draco was a little unhinged because of it b)He is not that bad of a guy c)Why Hermione and Ron did not work out d)To add a reason to get everyone together quickly at the end.

As for keeping writing, you don't have to worry about that! I love it! Thanks again, and be on the look out!
 

Longfletch
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 06/11/07
Awwwwwwwww. It's not cheesy. It's wonderful fluff. I do like how Draco and Harry are getting along better and that life has moved on. How are the rest of the Weasleys holding up now that Ginny is in prison? Just something I was curious about. Well done on the whole and I'll be waiting for your next project!
Author Feedback: Thanks for the reveiw. You have really stuck by! I am confused, though. In the epilogue, Ginny is coming over to Harry and Hermione's house (with Fleur, while Harry is out to help Hermione with the baby). I think you might be confusing evil Ginny of one of my other stories with non-existant Ginny who didn't even get a cameo in this story. Either way, thanks for reading and reviewing... and look out for my other new stuff... sure to come soon!
 

baileyboo016
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/11/07
Yayy! I loved the epilogue. Liked the ending with draco and Harry getting along. ANyway loved the story and I can't wait to read more or your work so write more soon!
Author Feedback: Awe, thanks... I do try! I am actually in the process of writing something called The Summer Job (L/J fiction), though I am not sure how it will be received over here. It is getting good reveiws on the other site. I might try it out over here.

But, you can bet I will write more! I promise!

Thanks for reading and reveiwing~
 

Indie
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/11/07
So you were right. It all came together quite nicely in the end. Thanks for not making Draco the villain. I'm glad he got the chance to redeem himself. Well done!
Author Feedback: While a Malfoy was the villain, Draco was never destined to be that villain. I think he wants to be bad, but his heart isn't into it. All the poor boy ever wanted was his father to accept him. Granted, Draco went to prison,but we don't know if it was for killing his father (which was more a hero act) or kidnapping Teddy (which is more likely).

Thanks for the review, and for sticking with it even when it looked bleak!
 

handhrlover
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/11/07
omg!omg!omg!omg!omg!omg!omg!omg!omg!omg! its greatttttttttttttttttt! i can´t put it in to words!!!!11 i iloved the story to bits!!! please write more stoires! you are a great writer!!!!!!! i just am enamoured by the story!!!!!! i love it! keep doing more GREAT stroies as i put it as i am sure it will be as good as this! i loved the part under the end when hermione asked harry if he was jelous! anyway... gotta go! cya!
Author Feedback: Awe! I am glad that you liked it so much! I do try my best, and though I probably should spend the energy I spend on writing this stuff on actually working on my book, this is by far more fun and more rewarding (as seen by your review). Thanks for reading and reviewing!
 

Beth Brown
Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/11/07
You have me intrigued with this wonderful piece of writing. I like the atmosphere of the story, displaying Harry's loneliness. His actions and even his surroundings mirror the loneliness.

I like the muggle characters as well. They're interesting and don't seem too far fetched.

Now for the fairytale: it's slightly reminiscent of Stranger than Fiction, but with your own style, thoughts and ideas. Your own artistic flare and it makes me enjoy this piece even more.

Good on you, man. I'm off to read more.
Author Feedback: Interesting you should mention Stranger Than Fiction. I watched it once and misplaced the DVD, just to have found it recently. It has been sitting on my desk here, waiting for me to dust off the DVD player and watch it again. I remember it being a good movie.

Unfortuneatly, after Harry leaves the muggle town we never really hear about the muggles again, and neither of Mrs. Jordan. Oops. They just kind of got forgotten.
 

oneiros lykos
Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 05/11/07
But in the end, the cure for werewolfism was found, Harry ended up with Hermione, little Teddy is perfect and oh, I love happy endings!
Author Feedback: I usually like to leave ending open ended, but this little story deserved a Happily Ever After.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 

Longfletch
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/11/07
Hmmm....nice last chapter. I've never heard of the concept of Lucius loving a Muggle before. Neat. I feel that a bit more could be done with Ron. I don't know. Feels like some of his acceptance of the matter is missing. The D/Hr also feels a bit odd. Almost as if Hermione would still run off with Draco if she had the chance, Harry being there or not. All in all, this is a good story. I highly enjoyed what I read and if there is an epilogue, I'll happily read it. Can't wait to see more from you!
Author Feedback: I am glad that all in all, it was acceptable. As for Ron's acceptance, I think it was the nod he gave them, and unspoked acceptance. Perhaps it hurt too much to put into words. As for Hermione/Draco, yeah... I struggled a bit with that. Granted we only had a hint into their relationship. Perhaps things between them were very intense?!

The epilogue is cheesy, I will have to appologize for that, but it is up. As for more from me, you can count on it. I have to focus on the other story I am working on here, and then I am off to complete another little fiction. Not sure which pairing I will do. There are a lot of restrictions on this site versus fanfiction.net, you should read Wood and Stone over there (same user name). Great little read.

Anyways, thanks for sticking with it, and reading and reviewing, of course. Have a good week.
 

baileyboo016
Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 05/11/07
Aww what a sweet ending! Very different from anything I've ever read, but in a good way. Love the story and I can't wait for the epilogue!
Author Feedback: Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am glad that it is different, but in a good way. Have a nice week.
 

baileyboo016
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/11/07
Aww poor Hermione, gosh this chapter even has me feeling bad for Draco. Anyways love the story and I can't wait to see what else is going to happen so udpate soon!
Author Feedback: Awe, thanks for the review, and I promise... I do not make anyone out to be a monster sans one person in the next/final chapter.

 

harry_mione_love
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/11/07
ok, yea. the draco/hermione...its a little bit wierd. but whatev. i mean--nevrmind. i wanna see what happens
Author Feedback: I know, most people aren't fans of them, and for all intensive purposes they weren't together, just had an affair three years prior to the story. He still has feelings for her, but her feels aren't the same (not only because Harry is back in her life). Hang in there, there is just one more chapter left (I think).
 

handhrlover
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/11/07
wow!!!!!I loved that chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait till the next! and no offence but i hope draco dies as he cant just listen to his father when he is safe!!!!!!!!! stupid idiot!
anyway... i loved the part at the end when she cant wait for harry to come and please make it that he can hear her thoughts!!!!! id love that!!!!!!
Author Feedback: I am glad that for the most part, people are liking the chapters ok. This one, I wasn't certain about but I felt it kind of explained enough to lead us into the next chapter (the last chapter).

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 

Indie
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/11/07
I almost missed the updated because portkey wasn't working very well! So Malfoy kidnapped Hermione because he loves her and because his father wants him to finish Voldie's work? Hm... I'm not sure how I feel about this whole thing. I just don't want Draco to be the bad guy again, I suppose, that's all. Can't you make his save the day in the end, so H/Hr can live happily ever after? Please?
Author Feedback: Trust me.

The nineth and final chapter to all of this will be... worth it all, I guess is all I can say without soundy cocky or letting too much information go.

Just bear with me.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.
 

Longfletch
Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/11/07
Damn, Draco. He's almost gone off the deep end from the lack of love and his condition. I like how you have this D/Hr thing going on, but I can see how Harry compares. I mean, Draco kidnapped her and is holding her hostage in his house. Harry, even if he is a bit bitter, wouldn't do that. He respected her and Ron enough to let her go without a fight. Perhaps I'm wrong on this. So the book was just a part of an elaborate trap! Was not expecting that. Can't wait to see Harry's battle plan.
Author Feedback: So I did ok with this? I know a lot of people take issue with the whole D/Hr thing, (including portkey) but it was something in the past and not the present. There is so much stuff going to happen in the next chapter (it is the last, so you know), it will probably be a much longer one, to be sure.

As for Draco, yeah, the poor boy's lost his ever-loving mind, but don't think for a minute he is going to let her go without a fight! He may love her, but he wants nothing more than to get back in his father's good graces and to reclaim honor to his family's tarnished named after all of the fiascos that the Malfoys seemed to have centered around during HBP and DH. Draco is clever, yes, and the book was an elaborate trap that seemed to correspond nicely with Hermione's arrival in Golden Valley.
 

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