AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 8 | Date : 04/10/08
i do not like this hermione at all, she acts like some cheap whore the way she reacts and talksto malfoy. sickening. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/08
I was looking around for some novels on H/Hr. This seems very interesting. I am off to read more of this. Weird thing for the minister to ask Harry to go away. Wonder what happend to Hermione and Ron... |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 19/05/08
I was looking around for some novels on H/Hr. This seems very interesting. I am off to read more of this. Weird thing for the minister to ask Harry to go away. Wonder what happend to Hermione and Ron... |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 10 | Date : 16/12/07
Yea...I do have to admit, it was a little chessy. I am quite amazed that Harry and Draco are on such good terms, but I guess it's somewhat understandable...
Great job. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 9 | Date : 16/12/07
Hm....the ending was alright. I was expecting more of a climatic ending. It sorta ended all happy. Not that I didn't like it, but I expected more....ahhh! (lol) during the middle. Like more resistance from Ron or something. I'm glad that Draco didn't kill Hermione or something. I guess Hermione really effected him. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 8 | Date : 16/12/07
Oh my goodness!!! Hermione had a year long affair with him! Wow-o-wow. That's quite crazy. Well, that was probably one of the best chapters. It definitely showed Malfoy as a changed person, but still not. Like you were able to capture that he's still Malfoy, but an in-love Malfoy. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 7 | Date : 16/12/07
That was an awesome chapter. Well, glad to know that Ron is still the same Ron and Hermione is still the same Hermione. Wow...Hermione and Draco had sex! And then he kidnapped Teddy. Wow..and there's something else that's not gong on. Lovely job at this. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 6 | Date : 16/12/07
Wow..this was quite a great chapter. Well, Hermione was quite blunt about her feelings for Harry still. Mostly people have her beat around the bush and such. Lovely job at this chapter. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 5 | Date : 16/12/07
Wow..well I didn't think that Neville and Luna were the writers...awesomeness. And I'm glad that Ron isn't dead. Hm....I wonder why he was so angry. Or maybe the book is foreshadowing in the story. Ooohh...double foreshadowing. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 16/12/07
Well, I definitely see the subtle and not so subtle reviews. I believe that Mrs. Jordan or Quinn would be Hermione. Ron died by whoever that "white serpent" is. Her child has been kept cative, and Hermione always loved Harry. I also believe that he'll have to fight the "white serpent" which could be Malfoy, based on the future chapter headins. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 16/12/07
Fwahahah....He's going back to Hogwarts that upcoming Sunday. Wonderful. I absolutely love this. I love how the book corresponds with the story. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 16/12/07
Well, this is really interesting. Obviously the person who is writing the story is Hermione. Lol. This is qutie an interesting story. Especially the part at the end where Harry gets knocked unconciuos. |
| |
usha88Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 16/12/07
This sounds really interesting. I would like to know why Harry had to go away, at least more of the reason. And I want to hear more of Hermione and Ron. |
| |
AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 17/11/07
So how did thd person get in2 his apartment? Was it wen he went out 4 a walk? |
| |
|
I will say this about people who like Hermione/Draco. Either you have to be completely oblivious and ignorant to everything that Draco has done and said to her, not to mention think very low of Hermione that she would drop everything and think nothing of what Draco did and act like some idiot valley girl, and have absolutely zero sense of what real relationships are based off of except those you watch on your soap opera shows. It's this kinds of stuff that make HP fan fiction look bad. |
Author Feedback: Six years changes people a lot. I guarentee that you have changed a lot, and that you are a different person now than you were six years ago. We don't know what their relationship entailed, and I am not stupid enough to forget what an ass he was to her during school. Perhaps almost dying twice in the seventh book really made him re-think his position on life.
As for assuming that I have "zero sense of what real relationships are nased off of except those [I] watch on soap opera shows", you certainly have a lot to say on the matter for someone who doesn't know me personally.
I looked to see how much wonderful stuff you have written here, to basis your knowledge on relationships and such, but was unable to because you haven't submitted anything. I eagerly await to read what the reviewer writes.
Just because you don't like a shipping between two characters or something isn't written the way that you would write it, doesn't mean it is wrong. It is different. That is why this is MY fiction. You ought to write YOUR fiction whatever way you want.
Thank you for your review, and I will certainly keep it in mind on any future works. |
| |
|