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lampessa
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 10/05/08
A/n: Okay that was gay. I'm sorry. Lol.

It wasn't the most stimulating profound thing I've ever read, but not totally gay either. There were things I liked about your story. I always prefer Ron and Ginny to have lives and not be completely focused on Hermione and Harry. You did a nice job with Ginny, still wanting Harry a little but thinking he might just have something with Hermione and they should get together. I loved Ron's personality because of things like -->Ron shook his head, revealing his board which said Penguin. “BAM!†How could I not love that?

I can't really see Dumbledore sitting down with them all to play the game but Meh, this is fiction, and even as it is, still better than any fiction I've ever written.


 

jennyberry_84
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/03/08
ohh so cute !!!!!!!!!!!!!
love it the hole idea of ron an luna 4 me it just fit great
 

Konflickted
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/10/07
That story was funny cute. I don't think it was gay (as you stated at the end). It was cute, indeed.
 

CryptoSquirrel
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/10/07
That was really cute. I love H/Hr, and I really really enjoyed that. However, I was not impressed with the author's note at the end; there were no slash pairings in that story. That is slightly offensive.
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/07
That was fun to read and it's was all so funny
Boy meast Wold is a real good show.
I like it when it was on ABC.
That was before Disney bought the network.
I like your short story and I am going to look at
you other story's.
Please keep it up.
I hope to read more of your wonderful and Excellent all other of the story's that you have.
But in then hear is cartoon ending.
tha tha tha tha tha tha that's all folks!
 

usha88
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/07
It was cute. I just thought it was written very quickly. There were a few typos and some of the sentences seemed long. The idea seems cute.
 

Rowena
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/07
You were right. That was hilarious! Great job, I especially loved the part where Ron came up with the name " Bob"
 

Lemric
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 28/09/07
boy meets world is definitely in my top 5 shows all time
 

liss xo 1221
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
It wasn't that bad. I miss Boy Meets World such a good show to bad I can never find it on TV. I love how Ron and Luna think a Penguin is a fish. It was a very sweet story. Same as when Eric and Rachel and Corey and Topanga were playing.
 

lostserenity
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
I love Boy Meets World too! lol. Anyways, very cute adaptation from that BMW episode. Love the character interactions. The ending could've been better, but you already knew that. Keep up the good work!
Author Feedback: see that was the gay part i was talking baout. i just randomly wrote it and after i posted it i was like, 'WhAt the hell?" lol. thanks for the comment! glad you enjoyd it!! muuch muuch loove
 

fanofastar
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
surely, 1 can only dream of such a happening! can't b true! but it wz quite a fun reading! so, no complains, but it wasn't clear up2 the last moment wat WAS his favorite colour...neway, well done!
Author Feedback: well not that that really matters, but i think he tried to make it very clear that it was blue. Lol, thanks for the review~~ muuch loove
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
That was funny and cute to read.
I love it.
now I can go to wrok with a big on my face.
 

husker_fan_2006
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
Aw, yay cheesy!! I love cheesy!! That was a nice little fluff, I think I remember that on Boy Meets World, though it's been ages since I've seen it!! Keep up your writer's mood, and keep up the good work!!
 

cool_himanshi
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
good chapter..the game was very interesting and fun to play...!!
keep it up...!!..take care..!!
 

KillerQueen
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 27/09/07
Yes, very fluffy, but I loved it anyway! Cute story - it brightened up my day, anyway!
 

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