missersSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/09/08
I really enjoyed reading this! I should start by telling you that I'm not really a H/Hr shipper, I'm more of a L/J and (don't shoot me!) H/G shipper, but I find myself on occasion reading other ships for something different. I am ever-so glad that I came across this little gem of a fic! I even put 'Umbrella' on repeat while reading.
This was such a sweet, romantic one-shot. You did well with how you painted the picture, your word-choices, the emotions came seeping through and I felt as though I had invested into a chapter-length story, rather than a one-shot. My gut was twisting while I was hoping for what Hermione wanted! I loved the little side bits you included - Lavender, touching upon Harry's history with Ginny and Viktor. They gave the story that added strength that made it so real.
Really lovely job and I thought you should know a non-H/Hr shipper absolutely loves this! |
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a really good read i truly enjoyed this story i look forward to reading the rest of your works |
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a really good read i truly enjoyed this story i look forward to reading the rest of your works |
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Yay hopless romantics... haha, it's a great story. I always loved the rain... and being in it with someone you love is alwaus fun too.
Keep it up
I love your stories
-megz- |
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AlanaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 01/07/08
aww... how unbearably cute! Really. It was sappy, and gooey and such a delicious mix that I just couldn't get enough. Thank you very much for this story. |
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dennisudSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 17/06/08
I read "10 things" which was ok,
"For you I will" which was great,
and "Somthing about You" which Blew me away!
This one is in the same style as For you I will and I want a saga with this style of writing from the epilogue from you!
Take it as a challange and make him something other than an Auror PLEASE!
She can be a healer, Teacher or Unspeakable but lets see how they get with the
"Next Seven Years"!
Now that's a good title right! |
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papermaskSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 29/05/08
Awww, how lovely is this? Very sweet story. Nice work! Your drunK Harry is quite funny.  |
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AAARRRGGGHHH! You are such a romantic!
It's been years since I read any romance novels, but you should write some original romantic fiction and send it to the appropriate publishers. You are a natural at this genre.
Don't argue with me! Auntie Crow is always right!
Romance is easy to write. Good, emotionally touching, heart-stopping romance is bloody difficult to write, yet you manage it with style, grace, humor and sensuality.
WRITE SOME ORIGINAL ROMANTIC FICTION!!! |
Author Feedback: tee hee  yes maam
Really, thats such a fantastic review. I'm sure every writer on here wants to write their own stuff, and I do too. It's reviews like this that give me more confidence to pursue that and so thank you very very much, you've no idea how much it means that at least one person thinks I could |
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I love this story so much!!
I just wish they had gotten their act together *before* Harry became a playboy. lol |
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That's a lovely, wonderful story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. It's a 'love-drabble', but it's beautiful and romantic and I really, really appreciate it. It's great when someone with your talent takes time to put on paper the kinds of feels that are so real and so evocative.
Great job
Regards,
the_scribbler
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Author Feedback: Thanks so much for your lovely heartfelt review - these are the reviews that keep me writing |
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omg. that was woonderful. i truly loved it,. and Harry was so cute. but i think i always find him cute. lol. awesome shot. XD |
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HHr4evaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 20/02/08
Hey great fic. i really love how you write your fanictions
great job!!!! |
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AshUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 08/02/08
 i feel content. That was one of the loveliest stories ive read in fanfiction, and ill be sure to read it many times again. |
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SireiSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 31/12/07
Just too sweet ^^ I love it! Though sometimes I wish to hit both of them to finally understand just why they belkong together! Or to lock them into a shed or something else until they talk!
Why can't people just talk about their feelings *looks somewhere else as she realizes she does that as well* Anyway, wonderful story! I really really love it! |
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wow..great story! the last sentence really wrapped up the story nicely! great portrayal of Harry being drunk...  |
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