jediyodaUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 24/09/07
that was so bittersweet. i would hope for more drama but it was beautifully and perfectly written. |
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Short and sweet! the only part I would wonder about is how Ron would react when it was Harry that Hermione fancied, and not him (you know how jealous he always was/is). I think the pairing of Ron & Luna makes such sense (and have no idea why JKR did not see that!). Lots of fun to read! |
Author Feedback: thank you for the review! the only reason that i didn't make ron super jealous was because i figured he was so fixated on luna that he wasn't worried about harry and hermione. yeah.  |
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Very fun story -- believable, and well-written! I'm intrigued at how Ron is totally absent from the story, pretty much. I guess he's just too busy, eh? Great job! |
Author Feedback: thank you for the review! i really appreciate it. yeah, i probably should have included ron in there more, huh? well, like you said, he was too busy with luna. |
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great story. i loved it so much. way to go!  i cant wait to read more of your stories. |
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ssm1122Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/09/07
What a wonderful explanation to change the cannon epilogue. Ron and Luna, Harry and Hermione it is how it really should have been, you did it well, not too messy and everyone ended up happy. nice job |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! i really appreciate it. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/07
How could it be his fifth year anniversary with his wife...when in the next paragraph you say it wasn\'r four years ago that he was married to Ginny? The math doesn\'t really work...unless he was married to the two girl at the same time for awhile. |
Author Feedback: ah, i knew i got it wrong somewhere. thank you for pointing this out to me! |
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oh my god love this story. Hated how the 7th book ended. don't know y jo put those pairings together. But love this.  |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! |
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LoveedooUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 22/09/07
aww such a cute little story...it makes me kind of sad that Ginny didn't get anyone though : (. maybe that's just because i'm kind of obsessed w/ D/G fics....but you are a very talented writer, i've read some of your other stuff and i think you can do more than just one-shots, but that's just me.
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Author Feedback: thank you so much! at the end, i hooked ginny up with neville, but i didn't include that too much into the story. i really appreciate your comment. |
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great story i cant wait to read the rest. hey i was wondering that maybe afte ryou are done with this story you could write one called just married. it would be great.great job with this story. |
Author Feedback: thank you! ^_^ just married, huh? hmm, i like the title. i just might work out a story for that. |
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that was a great story i cant wait to read thee rest of this story. |
Author Feedback: thankyou so much! i should have the next (and probably last) chapter up later today. |
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