LOL @ Sirius & Alice!  Aw, Lily can't stop looking at James and blushing. That's so sweet! I wonder how they're time in Hogsmeade will go. |
Author Feedback: I had to find a reason that James and Lily HAD to be together (while keeping their friends occupied rather interestingly). Read the next chapter... I wonder how it will go, as well... after what happened... |
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LOL, That scene when Lily accidentally hit James with the broom is hilarious! Aw, Lily is going to have more flying lessons with him. Go James!  |
Author Feedback: I know. I laughed so hard when I went back and read it, and each time after that. I could see myself hurting him by accident out of excitement!
Thanks for the review! |
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what a great story so far. i can't wait til james' and lily's next flying lesson. keep up the good work. |
Author Feedback: Thank you and for your reply.
There is more to come, for sure. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 4 | Date : 30/09/07
Mhhh! That was sooo sweet! They are actually getting along! I cant wait for the next update which better be soon... or else!
Just joking, update when ever you can and i will be extremely happy!
Till you get another wonderful chapter out
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Author Feedback: Awe... thanks. I am finding that it is taking me two night each to write each chapter (which is fine, because they seem to be longer that way and of better quality).
I have four nights next week scheduled, so in theory... I should be able to get out two next week. The thing with Theory is... it is always ready to be proven wrong.
I like that they are getting along, but sad about what is going to happen soon. But, oh well... we will just be happy about now. |
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love it so so so so much...! keep goin baby!! rocks!! wow! make em kis!!!!!! |
Author Feedback: LOL... Glad you love it.
I have almost completed the forth chapter. It is a little slower, but... I swear... completely needed to put the building blocks into place.
Thanks for the review! |
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james' eyes are hazel not blue, and I have really nothing else to say but yea ok  |
Author Feedback: Info noted, thanks. I couldn't remember really what they looked like (or what they were mentioned to look like), so I picture this guy I used to know, Josh, and pretty much imagined that he was probably the closest to how I imagined James would look, and Josh had blue eyes.
I keep that in mind for next time. |
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FLying is important and it is fun to do even in a plane but I do prefer a broom  |
Author Feedback: Most fly-ers probably prefer the agility of the broom over a clunky plane any day. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 3 | Date : 27/09/07
BRING ON THE GALLOWS!!! That was soooooo cute! You are such a good writer and i cant wait for the next intallment which i hope is soon! |
Author Feedback: Hey glad you liked it. I am hoping to have the next chapter up, um.. say Saturday night? Depends on how much time I get to devote to it. I know I said I would write it all and then post, but I just couldn't do that with this story, as well. Did you know, the whole chapter 3 spanned six pages (typed 12pt New Times Roman font) but was only like 1 sheet of very small note book paper. Crazy!
Anyways... sleepy rambling. LOL.
Glad you liked and hope the rest of the chapters really peak your interest! So until Saturday... enjoy. |
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I really enjoyed your story "to wash the black dog" and although there's not much of this up yet it looks to be just as good, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
Author Feedback: I am glad you liked To Wash The Black Dog, and I hope that this will continue to grab you attention. |
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amazin writin! i love ur style! jus keep goin! cant wait for the flyin leson! |
Author Feedback: Chapter Three will hopefully be up by Wednesday night. Thanks for reading and for commenting!
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 2 | Date : 23/09/07
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! I love typing the word ha it is just so easy! Ha ha ha ha! And not to mention fun!
This was a really good chapter, it made me giggle! I cant wait for the next one which i hope comes out soon! |
Author Feedback: I am glad that you liked it, and hopefully any future chapters I belt out in this thread will make you giggle.
I will probably work on getting chapter three out on Wednesday. It is going to get easier to get stuff out quicker after 10-05 (my last day of work)... I have decided to take an early retirement (at the ripe old age of 25) to raise my 2 year old (and the inspiration for The Lost Daughter of Potter, because Liz looks just like Hermione). |
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Aw, Poor Lily!  Yaay for a flying lesson for Lily from James! Hee hee, It so reminds me of Harry's love of flying, and Hermione's fear of it. I can't wait to read the next chapter. |
Author Feedback: As much as the books pair Harry and Ginny being like James and Lily, I think Hermione and Lily are more alike.
JK never told us why Harry went to live with the Dursleys and I have to assume that by the time Lily and James died, the Dursleys were the only family Harry had left because everyone else had perished.
Thanks for reading. |
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Nice beginning! I'm very curious as to why Lily was three weeks late. (LOL, I know, I know, I'm just going to have to wait to find out.) I do have one tiny nit pick. If Lily was reading tea leaves and using a crystal ball, then wasn't she in Divination and not Astrology? |
Author Feedback: Good question. Probably had to do with the fact that I had no idea how to spell Divination. I will go back and change it though. |
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cant wait to see where this story goes. i don't normally read lily james fics, but this one looks interesting. |
Author Feedback: While Harry/Hermione fic get more readers, I think these are a bit easier to write because there are less expectations on how the characters are. We only get snippets of info on either of James/Lily from JK's books. It gives a writer a bit more freedom.
Thank you for reading. |
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Angel 737Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/09/07
It was really good! I cant wait to see where this story goes! Please update soon!
I was so happy to see that you got another story out!
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Author Feedback: Thank you. I figured I would just do what I like in between me writing the book my publisher wants written. That is work, this is fun.
I will update soon. |
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