It's one of my favourite J/L stories, it's funny, it's realistic and Lily isn't such a b**** who changes her mind every five seconds and James isn't changing for her. It's funny, sometimes sweet, sad and all important emotions are here - anxiety, anger, friendship, love, desire and I really like how this story ends.

YAY!!!!!! Lily and James are finally together and Benjy's out of the picture! Serves him right. Anyway, this was my favorite chapter and this was a great story, so, good job.

OH NO!!!!!!!! I feel so bad for James!!!!!! Lily really is amazingly stupid with this stuff not to realize how much of a jerk Benjy is. The worst thing is that I'm the same way lol

I hate Benjy!!! I've said that so many times but he really doesn't deserve Lily. I'm soo frustrated with this right now! lol

I don't like this chapter, but that's not your fault, I just don't like that Lily won't talk to James anymore because she feels so terrible. She didn't even do anything wrong either! What I do like though, is that James realized he was falling for Lily, even though Remus and Sirius honestly weren't very supportive.

O. M. G.!!!! Naked in a bed that's not hers??? Wow, I cna't wait to read the next chapter! lol

Hehehe go James!!!! "You don't deserve her, and that is why will get her." I love that! It's amazing to watch him handle this stuff!
Oh, and for the record, I love explanation points, so I use them a lot lol

Ew! Ew! Ew! I hate Benjy Fen-Prick!!! I really do! James is so much better for Lily! Benjy doesn't deserve her! I hope she realizes that soon, because I keep wishing for it to happen every time they go on a 'date'.

Oh no!!! I wish Lily would give up on Benjy and realize that James is totally falling for her and he's so much sweeter than Fen-Prck. Lol great name by the way; it fits him perfectly. Ugh I hate cheaters.

Lol, Drunk Lily??? That's hilarious. By the way, you wrote that part where Lily messes with Benjy perfectly.

Another super sweet chapter. James is the best! And I like how your versions of the characters (like Lily) aren't exactly canon, but still good and still believable. I think it's cool how you made James talk to Lily about wanting to change; most stories have him talking to Sirius or the other Marauders and it makes a nice change.

Awww! James is sooo sweet and I love him! I wasunsure about this story at first and abut how James felt about Lily in the beginning, but I like it now! I need a guy who can say to me what James said in this chapter and not be lying through his teeth lol

Love this story! I can't believe Lily still loves Benjy, although I kind of understand how she feels.

It's a great story!!! I just spent... i don't know how many hours reading the story!!
I'm interested in the redux
you seem like a good author!
loved the writing
keep it up
-megz-

why would you do that i liked the orignial one but if you want to redo it by all means go ahead, i know it will be good !