Wow!That was simply AMAZING. I've just finished reading it and a smile is plastered in my face. It was just adorable. I wasn't expecting it to end like that, which is good,you know. Not predictable,and all that.Keep writing!You're great!
Kipa

I really love this song. I really love all of Dashboard Confessional's work.

That and I really like this story. Its a different spin of the story. I did read one somewhere on another site with it being Sirius and them Remus being the other person in Lily's life and James still being almost, left behind, in her shuffle, but I much prefer this version, its easier to dislike a unknown!

Good work. And Good taste in music! =o)

Kudos.

Awesome story! loved it! it's so like cute!!!!again.. i loved it!

whoa, that was interesting, no dialoge but still good, kudos to you

I loved it. I hope to see something else from you soon.