AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/05/08
LOVE IT! THIS IS THE BEST STORY YOU"VE WRITTEN AND I'VE READ ALL OF THEM!!!!!  |
Author Feedback: Wow, thank you so much! I can't believe you've read all of my stories - that's so sweet of you! Feel free to leave your name next time and I'll dedicate a story to you. |
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 i love it sooo much i cried!!!  sooo good!!  i love it! |
Author Feedback: wow, thank you so much! *hug* |
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Ah cool very interesting twist here can't wait to see what reunions are like family wise and if they add to them will their current spouses. |
Author Feedback: you know, i might add a reunion chapter. i think it would be fun to write. |
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Good story. Start a new one soon. I like that they were all cheating on each other. That's funny. What I was thinking about is the fact that cousins would become stepsiblings and would maybe someday share half-siblings. That'd be weird, but funny. |
Author Feedback: thank you for the comment! yeah, the cousins would have to adjust to a new family lifestyle.  |
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Very interesting. I'm glad that in the end they all ended up with their true loves. What can I say? I'm a romantic! |
Author Feedback: me too! ^_^ |
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Ha I liked that it was really clever  I read your other short too - you have a real knack of cutting straight to the chase dontcha!
Your writing is really sharp and has a deft touch so I suspect u can get away with a lot, a lot of people attempting shorts like this would sound woefully unbelievable but I really like yours. They seem very accurate to me too - I mean as soon as I read 19 years later in DH I thought 'ok so they're all having affairs right?'
Good you're upfront in your summaries so anyone who flames can't say they weren't warned!
Great idea well done - I don't think you absolutely needed the last paragraph of this one, but was still kinda cool to see what happened  |
Author Feedback: thank you so much! i'm really only remotely good at writing shorter stories, so it means a lot to hear your compliments! thank you! |
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DylanUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/07
I'm never keen on 'affair' fics, because of all the pain it causes. But you seemed to have glossed over this rather well, even all the children accepting it without one tear being shed.
Perhaps a tiny bit too unbelievable. |
Author Feedback: i'm not too happy about the affairs myself, but i'm sure they are forgiven. yeah, it is a bit unrealistic, isn't it? oh well. thank you so much for the review! |
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Harry85Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/07
Is this finished? If it is, you could have dwerlled more on the breakups, as peaceful as they were, and the new marriages... |
Author Feedback: yeah, this is finished. at least for now.  |
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gingercatSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 18/09/07
I can't believe they All took so long to make things right.
Good story. the Kids were fine and that is so important! |
Author Feedback: lol, thank you so much! |
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I really don't approve of affairs, they just seem morally wrong, but as long as H/Hr are finding a way to be together I can totally deal with it. Love it! |
Author Feedback: i'm not too fond of the affairs, either, but i'm sure they are forgiven. thank you for the review! |
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great story i cant wait to read the rest. this one is going to be sweet. |
Author Feedback: well, there's no more to it - this is it. thank you so much for the review! |
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