That's sooo sad that Hermione and Harry were supposed to get marry and now since Harry died in this version they can't. I like how Hermione wasn't telling anyone about the engagement it just shows more that Hermione was better than Ginny. We all know that Ginny would of told the world after one day. Anyways great story. I think is was awesome. Keep Writing.

Oh my God!!! That last line by Neville made me cry!!! It's so sad!!!

I couldn't bear to think of Harry dead but your story is so sadly and wonderfully written, I couldn't help but feel Hermoine's pain!

Absolutely heartbreaking. I'm sat at my desk at work nearly in tears! Maybe I should actually do some work now?

Rhiannon xxx

Very touching piece can serious see them being secretive and keeping it to themselves not sure what they future was to hold. Very touching Glad Hermoine opened up to someone at least.

That's so sad and yet so very well written. I liked this very much. Good job!

such a beautiful story. i really enjoyed this - thanks for sharing it. looking forward to reading more of your fics soon

I really enjoyed how simple this was. The simplicity of it all, the plot, the dialogue, it really worked and said so much.

sad, depressing, and an over all great story. i love it and i loved Forever as well i have it favoritedon another site. i was cool to see lavander in such a diferent role. can't wait to see other things by you later

This was truly the way DH should have ended. I would have preferred it this way than the actual ending even though in your story Harry really died. I loved every word of it - it was very sad, but beautiful. And we got a perspective of Lavender that we would never have seen otherwise. Their undying love for one another should have been the ending to what was once a great series (until book 6 that is).

Oh! This was so sad and beautiful! I just loved the line Neville said:

“I don’t think that she knows how to be in it without him.”

Really well said. Hope to read more from you soon.

Thank you. Thank you for the story, it really moved me. I think you made more sense explaining what Harry and Hermione were for each other, than J.K did with her ending. Although it was sad I think it was one of the best written stories I have ever read. bye

Wow, I can't even write the words to say how much i like this one-shot. It was more realistic and interesting than DH's plotline and epilogue. It was well written and very emotional. What I like about this though was how it was Lavender's point of view. You made her seem real, and I really liked this story and your other story (Someday) which was a genius idea by the way. Keep writing I'll keep looking for your stories.

Really good and really sad. I loved it. I want to write a paragraph about how great this was but I can't even think of what to put into the words

As heartwrencing as this was, I do have to admit that if JK Rowling had ended the story this way I would have preferred it to the living Harry.

The inherent problem was JKR didn't seem to take her characters seriously in either HBP or DH...and that epilogue was merely the cherry on top for all of us...shippers and non shippers alike.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

I liked it though it was really sad. You wrote it beautifully though.