Now there is an ending that is much better. I just don't understand why Rowlings paired Ron and Hermione and Harry/Ginny. Don't get me wrong Rowlings is a great writer, but that just sucked. Anyway loved it and plan to read more of your stories.

Nice little ditty! And overall a wished upon ending!

Please continue with more stories!

dennisud

heya...i wish the end to dh HAD BEEN THIS ONE...nice writting...wishes wishes...lolzzz...still

great piece
keep up the good work...
well done!
all the best!

I like this ending a hell of alot better then the \"original\" ending of deathly hallows but then again Harry and Hermione is the most reasonable pairing there is in my opinion....which now that the books out and has him and ginny paired up is worthless to the actual story line but I can give wormtails....tail about it, lol

Yes I'd much rather have read that at the end of DH than the Epilogue that was published. Even if we didn't see Harry and Hermione get together during the books it would have been much better to know they ended up together. Not to mention it would have made much more sense. I would love to print this and rip the epilogue out of my copy and just kinda tape yours in there instead. Do you think anybody would notice?

the way the epilogue should have been , however ron should have ended up married to lavender or fleurs sister

The only problem I had was the fact that there was no Draco Malfoy! What kind of HP fanfic is good without pages after pages written about Draco and Ginny's love for eachother? But otherwise it was very good, and I am quite glad you added Ron/Luna too!

this was kind of confusing with the whole Ginny/Harry/Hermione thing at the beginning. and the whole red-haired thing + Ginny being all matronly kind of threw me off, but then i realized that lily had red hair... but it was sweet at the end, tho.
luv, ella.

Yes, that's the way it should've been alright! Harry & Hermione forever!

i liked it very much... was a bit snarky at the end but overall it was very very very much enjoyable

Hi I was rather interested in your story, not quite what I expected, what the heck is a proctor though, that bit baffled me. The only proctor I ever heard about is a member of the church of Scotland.

This was really quite good. I usually dont go for stories that try to "correct" or re-explain the ending (of book 6 or book 7), as sometimes they just... try... too hard. This was really excelent tho.

I liked how you used Ginny in the beginning. She was right in there in the conversation, making me wonder how she fit in. I obviously knew that H/Hr would be the current couple (this is portkey), but I wondered if maybe James was Ginny's child from either an earlier relationship or marrage to Harry. with that proved wrong, I like that you seemed to make her a really close aunt. That James would address her so, that she she could be confused as a parent.

I also love that you didnt have to sacrafice Ginny (or Ron for that matter) to make you story work. Loved your nods to my favorite parts of the cannon epilogue: the partially-cannon banter between them, about who's the famous one, and Harry's subconcious touching of his scar and how it hadnt pained him. All is well indeed.

Well I really enjoyed theis much better than what is in the book. Can you tell I really didn't like the ending to it. Highly enjoyed it and will be looking for your works in the future

I liked it a lot. I thought that it was cool how you put Ginny with them to make us wonder. I enjoyed it and hope that you will write another story or one-shot soon.

I don't know how to edit without losing reviews as I have never tried, but I do think this was a pretty good first attempt at writing fan fiction. Good luck on future ventures!