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Tank03
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
This was brilliant! You should really have more confidence in your writing as I've yet to read anything by you that hasn't been both thoroughly enjoyable and entertaining.

At one point I was feeling a bit bad for Ginny, it can't be easy accepting that the person you love doesn't love you back. That sympathy dwindled with her disparaging comments about Hermione however.

That was a really touching scene between Harry and Hermione. I particularly loved the line,"...and all the little gestures I can't control sometimes...", her panic at being "found out" was poignant and very well written.

I'm hoping that this isn't the end of this series as I'd love to see what happens next and how things end up between Harry and Hermione.

A truly well written and thoroughly enjoyable story; thanks for sharing.
Author Feedback: hey Tank! Good to see you!

It's my grammar I don't trust, lol. And you know, the stories always sound better in one's head *coughJKRH/Gcough*, so I'm always suspicious, lol.

I kind of understand the sympathy towards Ginny. Been there and all..but I don't like JKR's Ginn. She disparaged anyone she felt like doing in canon, so I don't have remorses of any kind

So you liked Hermione? I love her. She deserves a good story. Just like Harry. And we deserve it too, I guess.

Thanks for reviewing Tank! And no, this is not the end
 

hermione_p
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
I read the story, and then read the reviews, and now I don't know what I like better, your wonderful stories or your replies.

But I have one question. Perhaps I'm reading more than it is, but when Harry starts to laugh out of nervousness, and tells her he doesn't love Ginny, is he saying what I think he is? It's a pseudo "I love you" and "You love me", right?

I was in tears with that part, and I wouldn't like to be wrong..

It's amazing how your writing can touch me. It's just simple and flows naturally. One of the best writers indeed.


Author Feedback: hermione_p:

You just officially won the jar of cookies.

You're the only one who read it the same way I read it (or wrote it, not very successfully it seems, lol). Harry's laugh is nervousness, sheer nervousness. He has realized, and has seen Hermione's heart, and he just wanted something to reassure the new concept. So, there.

I love Harry, I can't help it.

Thank you so much for your nice review. I'mhappy to see you enjoyed, tears and all!

hugs!
 

telmie
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
What a beautiful piece of this great series you are writing. God bless you (even if you don´t believe in Him, I claim for His bless) because you are one of the best authors in this world.
don´t forget about that.

Even after the hell disaster 7th book, great authors still writing, it´s so good know that we will have great stories to read, everyday, and you contribued with this today, in special.

this chapter was so strong and sweet at the same time. all that translate in Harry. He dismissed Ginny in a strong way, and take care of Hermione in a so sweet way (“Good,” he says, smiling. “Because you promised.”) that´s impossible not cry.

congratulations, always, and I hope read the next chapter , I really hope. You are a talent girl.


telma.

Author Feedback: It won't be me the one turning blessings down, Telmie, so thank you! *hugs*

I was afraid too that the wonderful actors on Portkey were going to be affected to the point of giving up writing, basically because I was planning to keep on coming here daily, as I've been doing for the past two years or more. But then it seems that there's a boom, which I hope stays here

I'm happy to hear you felt moved with my fics, because I know how some stories make me feel. And the "because you promised" came out of nowhere, I promise. It was like I was reading it at the time.

Again, thank you so much for you nice words and wishes, Telmie! Hope to see you around!
 

MandaEvelyn
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
Yay. Ginny's such a complete jerk in this story. I mean I get it. She's mooned over Harry for years so of course she is hurt. Who wouldn't be? But still.....

Anyway. I loved the way you got Harry and Hermione together. It was so sweet and seemed very natural. Bravo.
Author Feedback: Ah, Ginny. Well, that was inevitable, I guess. I feel that JK did a poor favour to her alledgedly love of Harry's life. OoTP Ginny started to annoy me, only to become insufferable in HBP. DH Ginny is..well, I was going to say better, but I really think it was just the same jerkGinny only low-key... Ok, I don't like her and I would have liked to, that's the thing. I wanted to like her, it didn't work.

Harry and Hermione *sighs* I'm glad you liked it!

hugs!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
The story was okay, but for future reference, many readers don\'t tend to take authors seriously who alternate caps in the title as you did. It seems very myspace-y.
Author Feedback: hey Anonymous Person IV!

Firs of, thanks for taking your time and review

But I'm not sure I understand your Myspace-y theory. Alternate caps in the title... I just woke up, maybe if when I read it later I'll get what you're saying better.

Ok, my little neuron...you're saying the letters in caps! Lord, I was thinking in Cap as in Captulos (Chapters in spanish). Did i do that? I don't even realised! I use the caps that way sometimes with ...bah, long story, longer than Myspace

Thanks for telling anyway!
 

p_delusional
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
I look up at him. Harry, my Harry, is waiting for me. And so I follow. Always.

I don't know, I'm totally useless when it comes to suggestions. The last sentence only makes me wish they'd go find a broom cupboard and snog or leave the Burrow and go to somewhere where they can live together forever You see, I'm so impatient. But doesn't that sound like fun?
Author Feedback: hahaha...don't worry, patience is not one of my virtues either. Sometimes I'm really ashamed of how anxious a cliffie in a fic can make me...

I was getting impatient with my own story, so imagine, the cupboard wasn't far from my thoughts.

Again, I'm so thankful for the bunch of reviews and nice words you've left me in, say, 5 minutes! Really, it's wonderful tohear that I can move someone the way I'm moved by others in here.

take care p! And delusional foerever, dear!
 

p_delusional
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
Hello! It's me again and I'd like to sat a few more words

At first, as you noticed, I didn't realize this was the fourth part of your fic. After reviewing this, I went back to the first and read them all.

I left a review per chapter, said nothing nearly enough for a great fic like this though.

Honestly, I never enjoyed a fic this much. Thank you so much for writing this. I just wanted to let you know that your work isdeeply appreciated. And thank you for your kind reply

Would love to read more from you, btw.
Author Feedback:

You're about my favourite person of the night, lol.

I've read all of your reviews, and really, I'm still surprised. I guess one never appreciate his/her own stuff as much as the others, you know, you can see the mistakes behind the scenes... hehe.

And dear, you can say all the words you want! lol.. I love replying reviews, it's like chatting with portkey mates but in a more intimate place than the actual forums

Any suggestion about the next part are SO welcome! What would you like to see? I have things in mind, yoiu know, but I'd love tohear suggestions
 

acoustics1220
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
my eyes bleed!!!

lol - NO. I liked this, yay for Harry and Hermione. A kiss! How beautiful!!!

When will you update again? Was there no other way for you to find your friend Steph? No alternate email? Hope she's okay.

I can't wait til the next story from you.
Author Feedback: Hope she's ok too! The last time she was really, really busy, that's why I didn't insist and jump off without parachute, lol. Anyway I haven't written anything for the next part. Actually, I'd love to hear suggestions everywhere, just in case my H/hr goes on vacation again..hehe.

Although, and I wasnt going to tell, I have a three chapter story, DH related (nothing to do with this) but for some reason I don't like it too much. As soon as I find what's off, perhaps I'll post it.

I didn't remember how nice to post felt!
 

gurujerry
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
Haha! Yes! Fantastic! At last! This is a wonderful wee series, I'm glad it's finally happened!
Author Feedback: At last is the right expression, lol. I'm glad it happened too!

thanks for reading gurujerry!
 

DeliverMeFromEve
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
Lol, I didn't think Harry was too bold. It was a long time coming! And besides, he was so gentle about it--there was no need to worry about an OOC throw-down. XD XD XD

I liked the way they came together. Back on the bench. ^_^
Author Feedback: No OOC = good. hehehe.

Ah, the little bench...I'm thinking that I should marry there, on top pf that Weasley bench, lol.

I love gentle Harry. Actually, I love gentle people, if they actually exist and it's not a ancient leyend, you know... I'm going to put my H/Hr neuron to work right now

Thanks again, Eve! *coughSameasmylastcoughCough*
 

jeanniefillion
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
What a wonderful chapter! I really, really wish JK would have written it like this. I can't for the life of me figure out how she thought H/G would work, considering it had no depth what so ever, and R/Hr was all about bickering and petty jealousy. LOL, Sorry for the rant. Yaaay for cute H/Hr!
Author Feedback: For the life of me, I can't either. Consider yourself at home if you want to rant a little more, lol. I love depth in stories. It doesn't have to be complicated type, but just deep. Hermione and Harry's relationship, of any kind, has depth. Ginny...blah, I don't even see her as a tridimensional character, so imagine.

Thanks a lot for reading, jeannie!
 

Anonymous
Unsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
I liked it a lot. I hope to see more writing from you. OH, and I didn't have a hard time reading it, you did fine.
Author Feedback: *exhales in relief* Thank you, anonymous Person III!! I'm glad your eyes are intact!

hugs!
 

DeliverMeFromEve
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07


That was wonderful! ^_^

At a certain point, I did feel so very sorry for Ginny, but I guess not *that* sorry. Lol. It was so nice to have Harry finally come to the realization. What a relief! And really, after all that stuff in DH, fics like yours make everything better.
Author Feedback: Eve!! *coughAngelicachapter15cough*

So you liked it? I can't shrug off the feeling that this was breaking the continuity. I'm glad you liked it! Your opinion is highly appreciated, in case I haven't told you before. And nah, don't feel too sorry for GinnySue.. she doesn't, believe me

I still think it was a bit rushed? I don't know, I'm not sure of Harry being that daring, you know. But I couldn't stand my own pace, lol.

thanks a bunch for reading,
 

Cateagle
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 13/09/07
*chuckle* Heh, that's a bit of poetic justice, there, for Ginny to force things and then find they're not as comforting as she'd thought and hoped. 'Tis truly a sweet and touching story without getting overly emotional. I wonder how much Ron's going to appreciate this development? For that matter, I wonder if Ginny is going to go off on Ron for not keeping Hermione "out of the picture"?
Author Feedback: Poetic justice..mm, I've always love the concept, and perhaps you're right.

Ron, in my head -hence, my story- is not that oblivious. Not after "The Bench By The Fence". He knows his sister, and of course he knows his two best friends in the world.

Ginny is Ginny, and it's always going to be...

thank you for reviewing, Cateagle! (lovely name, by thw way!)
 

October
Signed | Chapter : 1 | Date : 12/09/07
Awwww....
It's lovely, as are all of your fics.
So glad you are continuing to write them!
Author Feedback: thank you! I'm glad I am, too! I hope to post the next one a bit sooner!
 

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