ainaSigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 22/08/08
Oooooooooh please do not abandon this fic! Please, PLEASE update soon! Can you sense my desperation?
Pleeaaaaseeeee. This story HAS SO MUCH potential! |
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i agree with you the complete lack of interaction between harry and hermione at the end of DH was a terrible way to end the series and so far im liking your rewrite so keep up the great work |
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lifter57Unsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 08/06/08
ARE YOU GOING TO FINISH THIS STORY OR ABANDON IT - PLEASE LET US KNOW |
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AinaUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 13/05/08
I've always wanted to read the next chapters of this story - this is exactly what I'm looking for, see... But gosh it's been a year since you've updated! PLEASE update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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JKMUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 04/04/08
Hi, I wondered while I read your note, did you ever study the traits JKR gave to the trio, as a Psychologist I decided to put my time to good use and I did study them, Ron Weasley has all the traits assossiated with a wife beater or bully, Hermione would never be able to consider him as the father of her children.
Now as for the final rubbish that was book seven, taking it at face value it had a romance going between Harry and Hermione right from the start up to the kiss that came from no where, JKR might be bad at writing romance but all the touchy feely stuff going on between H/Hr during their time alone in the tent was definitely not platonic. We then move on to the power he knows not, what happened to that? Oh I forgot to mention that when Hermione put up that shield to seperate Ron and Harry she must have been standing with Harry because Ron ended up on the other side from her, she also refused to leave Harry, a girl in love with a guy would not stay while he left no matter what she had promised.
So the last chapter and epilogue, well with out the power he knows not etc HArry would not have won and there would be no stupid elipog. |
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I'm really enjoying this, it's a great way in which we can have some sort of h/hr understanding without ignoring the epilogue. Great! |
Author Feedback: Unfortunately, I can't ignore the epilogue. Maybe someday I'll be able to do that but for now I have to accept that it happened and then take H/Hr where I want them to go in the future.
Thanks so much for your comments. I'm so grateful for your review.
Take care. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 23/10/07
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Author Feedback: Well, Anonymous  , I'm going to update as soon as I can find some time to start writing. Things have been insane and there simply hasn't been time to think about the next chapter. A lot of what I want to include in it was written before I'd ever posted the introduction, but I need to change the way it's told.
Thanks for waiting on me, supporting me, and loving me.  I love you, too.
*kisses* |
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redshoesUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 10/10/07
This is lovely. And I think you\'ve captured the always analytical, always verbal Hermione. Except now that she\'s older she sees things more deeply. She sees their role in their whole society--or what their role SHOULD have been. I\'m really glad you\'re exploring that a little.
You can see why Rowling couldn\'t allow them to talk in the Epilogue. Anything conversation they had with each other would underscore how their relationship and understanding of each other was at a completely greater depth than either of them had with their canon spouses. |
Author Feedback: You. Are. Awesome.
I really can't wait to finish this and get it all out there. Much of what I'd written previously will still be included in the next chapter(s) but it will be told with a bit less anger.
I'm looking forward to reading your tale, too. 
As for the epilogue, I really, really, really wish that I could ignore it, but this time around I just can't so I have to tell my own ending --- sad and unfair as it might be (and you know what I mean). 
Big hugs to you. Thank you SO MUCH for absolutely EVERYTHING.
Terri |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 06/10/07
Oh my gawd. That last line just did it. I cried. SO TRUE! I love this storyline! It\'s what I\'ve been waiting for for MONTHS! |
Author Feedback: Thank you!
I really hope to find some time to write in the near future - it's been too long.
I really appreciate that you took the time to review and I'm even happier to hear that you've been waiting for a story like this.
Thanks so much.
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great job. i cant wait to read the rest of this story. |
Author Feedback: Thank you. I hope to be able to get back to it soon.
Your review is very much appreciated. |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/10/07
you are very close to describing exactly how I felt about the epilouge and the end of the story in general,I started out being a harry ginny guy,mostly because whether it was written by JK that harry and hermoine were such close friends(or that I pickup that they were the closest of the whole story,often in books the author knowing or not lets the readers mind fill in the story to get the depth of detail and plot that the author wants and you will often find that the best authors have a way of doing it so well that you would of swore that they wrote things that arent even in the story)so I was happy with the friendship of harry and hermoine because they started out so young that it would have to be frienship first. but after reading a thousand harry ginny storys and nothing else it made me miss a simple fact in life great loves often start as great friendships... anyway I love the style and story so far keep it up I am goin to read your other storys why I wait for this to continue.
thanks for the work
CD
that I didnt see harry and hermoine |
Author Feedback: Harry and Hermione are still the only thing that makes sense to me. You're absolutely right, - "great loves often start as great friendships" - is an excellent line.
I've never seen H/G. I've always known that Ginny crushed on Harry, but I've never seen it in reverse - through all 7 books. I won't go into it now - I know they dated - but there is so much lacking in H/G (for me) that there's simply nothing JKR could do to make it make sense.
At any rate, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'm really hoping I'll have time to start writing again one day soon. Thank you so much for your review. |
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o0o, and the angst makes an appearance! i'm so excited to see how this story turns out. It was funny, because after reading the epilogue, i had the same thoughts as you did about the prejeduces. it does seem a little ridiculous. I'm glad you're writing this story so that we can all get a little bit of closure. And i have to say, the writing is as good, or perhaps better, than it was before.
Keep up the incredible work Terri. I love seeing new chapters from you. I know i'm always in for a treat when i get those emails!
Josh |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 3 | Date : 05/10/07
I love it. It´s so sweet somehow but it still makes me sad |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 2 | Date : 05/10/07
Really good I think. I felt so sad when it was that thing that she would have flung her arms around him for a long time ago |
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AnonymousUnsigned | Chapter : 1 | Date : 05/10/07
It sounds really intresting and shall be fun to read. Even tough I must say that I liked the ending |
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